| "Making love at night" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Devilangel620 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 18:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
yay!!!!!!!!!lemon.YUM!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: i said i'm ALWAYS on but not ALWAYS there. On: June 13, 2005 19:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
your "spaghetti" was great!
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Reviewed By: snowkitsune05 On: May 28, 2005 03:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pllleeeeaaaassseee continue? *puppy dog eyes*
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Title: Woot Woot
Reviewed By: XxTake me back somedayxX [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 21:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WoW I thought that this was a very instrsting and fun fic. I enjoyed reading it I hope you keep up the good work in all your fics. XxLaTeRxX
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: lauryn n. On: August 28, 2004 08:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
You didn't bother with all the before and after crap, just the lemon, and I thank you for that. =) I think all one shots should be PWPs.
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Reviewed By: hun On: August 25, 2004 22:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, it's ok. it could be a little longer and a little more detail. i don't think you should continue this because your writing isnt that good. all in all, i rate this a C/C-
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Reviewed By: sango-chen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 22:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Inuyasha's another one of the anime guys I'd like to tie to my bed. *lecherious grin* anywho, I loved this!! and I'm pretty sure my muses mini-elijah mini-yami and mini-pietro liked it too.
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