"Usagi's Choice" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: KOOL Reviewed By: blackcat99955 On: March 05, 2005 10:39 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: your story is so kool and i think usagi should stay with gohan hope that help cant wate until the next chapter i love ur story
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Reviewed By: bdngirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 12:20 CST Comment/Review: I like the story so far. So please update it soon.
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Reviewed By: roseofvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 10:24 CDT Comment/Review: I loved the chapter, but I did find some grammatical areas though a few and a misspelling. But the content is great. The characters seem to be in character (which I like) and I can visualize what's happening and how the characters are feeling. I especially like how smug 18 was acting. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: rose of vegeta On: October 18, 2004 11:46 CDT Comment/Review: I'm assuming this takes place in the Mirai timeline?? Anyway, great story. I haven't been this hooked on a SM related fic in a long time.
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Reviewed By: S.D. On: October 15, 2004 17:28 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: That was great! I love Sailor Moon and DBZ. this is such a good story. please continue.
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Reviewed By: rose of vegeta On: September 17, 2004 08:22 CDT Comment/Review: oh this is so cute and endearing so far (quite a sad beginning...but was needed i suppose). i've lost interest in SM a long time ago but this has renewed my willingness to read an SM fanfic. Can't wait to see what else happens.
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Reviewed By: ChibiHaruka On: August 26, 2004 03:36 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Poor Usagi!... Is she truly gone!? I hope not!... Please say it isn't so.... Though this was a sad chapter I thouhgt you did great job on this and hope to read more...
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Reviewed By: Rimute [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 04:38 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I loved the begining please write more!!!!!!!
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