| "A Change in Personality" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: wh..what
Reviewed By: shikisou On: June 10, 2005 23:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
i haven't read this yet but how could you change their personalities??? it's just too weird to know my cold yet cool eiri is..is..like shuichi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: princessmikoyokai1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 16:20 CST
Comment/Review:
I not my fault I have tried to fix the chapter but it always ends up like that. If you like go to http://www.fanfiction.net/~shuchan121 it work just fine there.
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Reviewed By: hellsbit_ch On: November 17, 2004 15:56 CST
Comment/Review:
Please fix the formatting of chapter 1. As it stands right now, one giant, unspaced paragarph is not readable.
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