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Title: umm
Reviewed By: myanime [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 22:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
umm were you wasted or something when you wrote this? When the hell does this story take place? Some parts sound like it's now and some parts it sounds like the fuedal era. You know get your damn story straight! Dumbass! Oh and please if you could either seperate the chapters or at least orginize it so the chapters look like they are seperated. like this: Chapter 1 sfjsijf blah blah blah Chapter 2 hfehfje blah blah blah like that.
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Title: PLZ
Reviewed By: CHICKEN MAN On: August 24, 2004 16:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
PLZ WRITE A LEMON BETWEEN NUMBER 3 AND NUMBER 4 OR ONE WHERE KING SANDY RAPES NUMBER 3. PLZ AND THANK YOU.
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