| "Teaching Rin" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: BossVund On: September 19, 2005 11:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usually don't write reviews but I had to say something about this story you've written. You see I've always been I big sesshomaru fan and most of the other stories I've read about him get his personality all wrong. You're story however has done well in potraying him and so I'd like to compliment you on that and hope that you keep writing. I've got to read you're next chapter.
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Title: Very nice!
Reviewed By: Azelle [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2005 02:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say that I love the direction that this story is heading! You've created such realistic and interesting original characters that I'm just as interested in them as I am with the canon ones, which in and of itself is a stunning feat in the world of fan fiction. I can't wait for more! Oh, and if you ever need or want a beta (or just some encouraging comments) for this or any other Inuyasha work you write, feel free to call upon me! I'd love to help!
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Reviewed By: AngelWings [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2004 17:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey! I thought I reveiwed this fic when I read the first chapter but I guess I didnt! Oppps!!! My bad!!! ^_^; Anwayz you have to update soon. Or else I'll send my evil flying monkeys after you!!! Muhahahaha!!! *Kurama sweatdrops* 0_o PLease forgive her behavior. She's crazy... Me:*laughing evilly in the background* And I got the papers to prove it. Kurama: 0_o I didnt know you had papers. Me: My dear sweet kitsune you shouls have known that. ^_^*back to normal now* Kurama: -__- Yeah... Me:I love you Fuzzy!!!*glomps Kurama* Kurama:@@*changes to Yoko* Me:*still glomping* ^_^ Yoko:I could get used to this Me: Wh what the??? Yoko:*glomps me* Update soon!!! Till next reveiw ~_^
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Reviewed By: deena151 On: August 25, 2004 02:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
half of chapter two messed up. it only says ""General!" yelled one of the soldier","ööööööööööö ;&o" then alot of the o thingy's. but other wise that it's all good
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