| "The Past of Love...The Future of Hope" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 16:31 CDT
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Hm, I suppose it would ruin the plot if Yugi and Yami did it on their 1st night together again. Anyway, the kiss was awesome, I'm so glad Yugi told Yami he loved him in Arabic! Lemon coming up soon? Yes!!
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Reviewed By: Magi Valkyrie On: September 05, 2004 11:11 CDT
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YAY!!!!!!!! *jumps up and down* yes, yes, yes, yes!!!! *stops jumping* oh man! Awesome, awesome!! Finally they kissed, I've been waiting for that part for so long! Very, very nice!!!
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Reviewed By: Yugi and Mai On: September 04, 2004 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool story!! I've just read all of your chapters and I must say i'm impressed. You may get confused in our nickname so i'll explain it...right I'm Yugi (I'm the one whos reviewing you) and I'm a 15yrold yugi height girl. I'm mad about Yugi and Yami. Unlike my sister who writes r-nc17 stories she is 12 and is very Mai like. She is very mad about Ryou and Bakura and 17 other anime characters. Well thats enough of us I will now talk about your ficcy. I can't beleive that is how yu-gi-oh really finishes and how did you find that out. You obviously aren't from England (Or you might be but thats where i'm from). Why was it that everyone apart from Yugi and Yami got layed? They will later won't they..please! I reallly want to know more so please update soon and i really like it that Yami has a bike (unlike me who nearly feel of one, stupid uncle). Please update cos there is so much i want to know. Very good chappy and story. bye *+Yugi+*
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Reviewed By: Magi Valkyrie On: September 03, 2004 22:13 CDT
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Yay!!! another awesome chappie! Hehe, i imagine all the Yami's ride motorcycles(although Marik already rides one >
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 17:10 CDT
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Yami + motorcycle = HOT HOT HOT... And I saw Andacondas yesterday, it was a little scary when the snakes attack the people. Well, update soon, k? I think it'll be interesting when Yami touches a piece of the Puzzle. Hey, how come Bakura, Ryou, Malik and Marik all had "fun" at night, and Yami and Yugi were just sleeping on the couch? Hm, maybe the others were more eager than the others.
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Reviewed By: MysticDarkFairy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 16:22 CDT
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I loved it. Please update soon. I will hurt you if you don't I want to know if Yugi will ever tell Yami that he loves him. Anyways, Um love the story chat later! ^_^ Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Magi Valkyrie again! On: September 01, 2004 21:01 CDT
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I forgot to thank you for the plushies! *huggles all the plushies* I love them!
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Reviewed By: Magi Valkyrie On: September 01, 2004 20:57 CDT
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sorry I didn't reply earlier! Was busy with school, any who, awesome chapter again!
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Reviewed By: michew [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2004 15:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!! i luuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuv it!!! its sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good!!! ^_^ plz update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 14:52 CDT
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=^.^= Aww, kawaii! This is really good so far, I like this a lot! The part where Yugi was hugging Yami was especially adorable, along w/ Bakura glomping Ryou. Haha, I never thought of him as a glomper, it's funny yet cute... ja ne! Update soon!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Sasuke89 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 00:30 CDT
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This story is cute and sweet and the same time without being unbearable. You really balanced everything out and it's turning out great. Please keep going! Love and Peace! Sasuke:)
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Reviewed By: Darkladyknight [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 14:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is really good, and i can hardly wait to see how the story unfolds. Well written. Please update soon, as i said this is really wonderful, i love yami an yugi.
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Reviewed By: Magician Valkyrie(not logged in> On: August 28, 2004 11:39 CDT
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*jumps up and down* Yami's back, Yami's back!!!! Yeah!!!!! Oooo, Oooo, are his roomates gonna be Bakura and Marik?! *laughs* hehe, sorry, I'm just really excited! Another awesome chapter! Your such a good writer. Anywho, I do hope other people will review this chapter, i have the same problem with mine! They read but they don't review! Anyways, can't wait to read the next chappie!
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Reviewed By: Magi Valkyrie On: August 26, 2004 21:39 CDT
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another awesome chapter! Jeeze, I love your stories! They're so awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Magi Valkyrie On: August 25, 2004 16:31 CDT
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I like, I like!!! It's sad though....poor Yugi! Will there be another chapter?? If so, I can't wait to read it.
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