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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2005 16:08 CST
Comment/Review:
i liked it but you gotta find a new way to describe your hentai scenes, any ways loved it i thought the flow was ok, a little broken up but OK
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Title: looooooved it
Reviewed By: inu yashas witch [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 14:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loooooved it it was so sweet though kinda sad add more
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