| "Hidden Beneath a Smile" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kit1002 On: October 13, 2004 01:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
AWESOME STORY!!!! I love it!!! I love Miroku too i guess (*^^*) I was really surprised that it turned into a Sess/Kagura pairing, but reading your story, I see how that would fit. Since you were saying that you just turned 18, that means that you are a Libra like me! ^o^ I just turned 18 on Oct 2. yay for us!
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Reviewed By: LSIE(Offline) On: October 12, 2004 19:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is awesome awesome. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: fire_goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 05:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Love your fic. I vote Rin/Sess!
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Reviewed By: tornado tail On: October 10, 2004 01:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is one of the best alternate universe fics I've seen in a while.Although I do wish you would update sooner, but I do understand you have a life. Hmmmmm who should I vote for.......Sess/Kagura always
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Reviewed By: lozenge On: October 10, 2004 00:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have an intriquing plotline going on.Needless to say you have me hooked.Though I will be disapointed if this isn't a Sess kagura fic.
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Reviewed By: kuramafan58 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 15:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
There were a few usage mistakes, but nothing too bad. I loved the use of adjectives. I'm sorry I only gave it a 7 in enjoyment, but honestly I've never been into the Alternate Universe thing. Don't take it personally; it's a beautiful story. I hope you keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: demon miko queen On: October 08, 2004 23:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
good story I'll be waiting for further chapters, oh yeah I'm into a Sess/Kagura pairing
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Reviewed By: crazydog On: October 08, 2004 23:48 CDT
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I vote for Kagura/Sess. Your story rocks, can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: bubblydemon On: October 08, 2004 23:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story, I just wish you would update faster. I hate having to wait for another chapter.AAAHHH.See that's how good your story is.You are making me scream. I'm totally into Sesshomaru and Kagura as a couple.Loving you!
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Reviewed By: Angelic Death On: October 08, 2004 23:20 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story,pleeese update soon, I can't wait to see who gets paired up.Kagura/Sess have my vote as the best couple.
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Reviewed By: angst queen On: October 08, 2004 23:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Your story has me hooked.I'm loving the characters in it. Who should I vote for? That's easy Sess/Kagura
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Reviewed By: desire's reign On: October 08, 2004 18:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story. Making Kagome capable of defending herself when she has to, is a refreshing change.In most fics she has to rely on others.As for pairings,ummmm...........Kagura/Sess definately.I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: canz On: October 08, 2004 18:14 CDT
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hey you finally updated! great story. I'm into a Sess/Kagura pairing all the way.
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Reviewed By: yay! On: October 08, 2004 11:35 CDT
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i love this story. it's finally updated! w00t! for pairing... hmm... sess/rin.
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Reviewed By: dawn's light On: October 08, 2004 02:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm absolutely loving this fiction! My friend woke me up in the middle of the night just so I could read this.It was totally worth it. I just love to see Kagura and Sess hook up...so they get my vote. Here's hoping they get to be a couple
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