| "Hidden Beneath a Smile" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: Josie n the PCats [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2008 02:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this story! Your writing and the plot you've created has drawn me in. PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE update :)
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Reviewed By: Niece [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 02:13 CST
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New chapter please?
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Reviewed By: Angelstars [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 18:52 CST
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Another great chappie. At last Miroku's secret is out! Although now he thinks his nearest and dearest are "dead" Inuyasha is at least thinking with his head keeping them "dead" for the time being, especially as "he" will think them that way. I forgot to mention how I think it's refreshing not to have Naraku as enemy number 1 for a change and at least have him on semi-neutral ground (least I get the impression he is not on either side, but his own heh) I actually like his character and Kikyou's... I am looking forward to reading more on what's going to happen! Poor Kagome; Miro doesn't deserve to lose another family member..
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Reviewed By: Angelstars [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 18:12 CST
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Well that was a cliffhanger! I do hope you continue to pick up from the 18 chapters you've already written and have yet to post the last few here on mm.org- this is a great fic! I'm surprised at the lack of feedback so far; it's rare to find a good IY AU that's not an over done subject.
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Reviewed By: Angelstars [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2006 20:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is a really great find! I can't believe you left it for so long... thank you for picking it back up! I'm looking forward to more updates. I really think the plot is starting to kick in now that you have twisted fates and people together; especially now that Inuyasha is starting to slowly work out what is going on.
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Reviewed By: Kit1002 On: December 11, 2004 15:35 CST
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Thank you for the birthday wishes! ^0^ I am enjoying the introduction/development of "Haku" (*^^*) It looks as though there is going to be something between Kikyo and Inuyasha too?? I am guessing that this story has only just begun. And I love it :) Can't wait til the next chapter!
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Title: WOW! Love it!
Reviewed By: Hentai_Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 04:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fic, it's great! Hurry up and get the next chapter out, I'm dying for more. Maybe you should think about putting some lemons in there, one for each character, yeah, that be good... but whatever. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: December 05, 2004 09:47 CST
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you repeat yourself in the summary.
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: December 03, 2004 10:47 CST
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nice update. anyway, i have a few corrections to point out that are beginning to bother me. "fallow", for example, is spelled incorrectly. it's "follow". also, whole is used incorrectly. the whole you use is like saying "i have a whole pie that needs to be cut". you're looking for "hole" as in "there's a hole in the wall" or "there's a hole in the ground". those are the two that i've noticed the most. i look forward to the next update! can't wait!
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Title: I like
Reviewed By: Hopes_fall [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 10:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo Zonza, It's me Demonicslayer under new name...I dunno y but it kicked me off Media Miner so I can't Update My stories! Can you please send me chapter 1-3 to My Story a thing of the past. PLEASE!!!! Oh and I like ur story! ^_^ Very nice....
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Title: Administration, Mediaminer.org
Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 22:41 CST
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You may not use the fiction to get votes on how it should progress that sticks it into a cyoa and those are being deleted. any new chapters that do ask for votes will cause the fiction to be removed.
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Reviewed By: fire_goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 05:50 CST
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A lemon w/ Kag and Inu would be wonderful! Great work, keep it up!
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Reviewed By: w00t! On: October 30, 2004 17:48 CDT
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great update! i can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon nsi On: October 30, 2004 08:31 CDT
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ooo great chapter... Please keep up the great work and update asap. -Krystal.
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon nsi On: October 20, 2004 06:41 CDT
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hey great story so far..... Too bad w/ Kag/Sess... I love the Rin/Sess pairings, but I do agree w/ u bout Kohaku/Rin...they are really cute together...if done correctly. Please keep up the great work and update asap. I can't wait to find out what happens next. -Krystal.
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