Title: What!
Reviewed By: just sum1 On: June 25, 2005 16:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
That wa shocking. Yami wood never do that. I liked the story, but, I mean, if u remember or saw the looks on Yami's face and the tears i his voice and eyes when Yugi was hurt or soulless, then that's impossible. I did enjoy it, but it made me shocked and cried. It made me think of a family matter that was kind of the same story as my nan as Yugi, my gramps as Yami and this women he knew as Tea. My nan died naturally, and well, u figure it out. So i'm soz if u think I'm rude, or this is a flame, it's not. It's just...weird. And I'm honest here. It breakes my hear about hw stuff like this happens everyday. But keep writing fickies, ok. They're AWESOME!
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