| "Ars Daemonorum~The Demon Art" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sky Dancer On: June 26, 2012 03:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Extraordinary story! Very Lovecraftian - which I really like. Fear is built slowly, subtlely. So much better (and more fearsome) than bash and slash stories. Thank you! Keep it up. SD |
Title: can you say...amazing
Reviewed By: synthesizedtwitchy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2009 00:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it, to put it simply it was deep and attention grabbing. I honestly couldn't look away from it.
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Title: Dayumn....you scared me and got me all paranoid!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons (NLI) On: June 03, 2008 12:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Seriously, I'll never look at chat the same again. I live alone and after reading this, I spent 3 nights staying up until the sun came up. SERIOUSLY. This story chilled me something FIERCE! New fav! This story RAWKS...and scares the living crap outta me!
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Title: Chilling
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2007 00:32 EDT
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Wow that was an entensifying story. It was well written, perhaps one of the best that I have read. The description of the demonic art, the way the demon plagued the girls mind. It was all just mind blowing. Such a fantastic piece. I don't think I'll ever be able to forget a story like this, not in a million years. Well done ^ ~
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Reviewed By: lorddaneofarnor On: September 06, 2006 00:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found it very intrigueing, it had element that reminded me of Poe. In fact it was asthough she had met him in a futuristic setting. The imagery was very clear and you did not over describe anything. I would say this is an excellent emulation of Edgar Allen Poe, my hat goes off to you. --Lord Dane
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 13:28 EDT
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chilling...
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Reviewed By: notashrimp1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2006 02:24 EDT
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Oh my god. Wow. That was really good. I mean, really really good. I can't believe it. I loved the depictions of the artwork. They really made the art seem hellish. Not to seem cliché or anything. ^^; But seriously, I was impressed. And that's a big thing, coming from me, cause I don't usually get impressed by stuff people write on sites like these. Hehe, I'm gonna go around and whisper in people's ears, "Sweet dreams.." XD
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Title: You Have Been Reviewed
Reviewed By: You Have Been Reviewed [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2006 03:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I actually had to read this one through a couple of times to pick out the technical problems with the story. This tale is chilling, gripping, and difficult to draw away from, much like the "Him" the narrator refers to in the story. As both an artist and writer, I had an immediate sense of familiarity with online community scenes such as the narrator speaks of, and the eerie similarity to reality heightens the feel of this story. The only real structural problems this story has are comma use (or rather, lack thereof this time) and some shadows of the tense-switching habit that Fanilia had in Spirit Seeker. Other grammar problems were isolated and did not really detract at all from the quality of writing. Were the fictions of those literary minds; greats of their times, dealing with a single subject-the darkness of men's fear-really fictitious? The semi-colon here is out of place; since the first part of that sentence cannot stand alone, and the second part is broken by dashes, it doesn't work. This would be better broken down in to a more complex but more cohesive structure: "Were the fictions of those literary minds - greats of their times, dealing with a single subject: the darkness of men's fear - really fictitious?" This separates the description of those literary minds from the rest of the sentence: "Were the fictions of those literary minds really fictitious?" Find the full review here: http://www.livejournal.com/users/uvebeenreviewed/1473.html
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: futekioosha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2005 01:32 EDT
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Wow fan, this was just fantastic...I was so drawn into this tale that I felt the fear of the author. You write really well. While this is the first of your writings I've read, it will not be the last. You have an awesome gift. Thank you for sharing.
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Title: nailbiting
Reviewed By: newkid [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 12:47 EDT
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excellente... or awesomely done... um.. can i put your story on another site? i wanna show ppl that there are good story written by reg. ppl in english too... cuz that site is not in english... but i like to ask for your permission to post it there... and of course... the credits will be giving to you... cuz you're the author of an incredible piece of work... love it... let me know...
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Title: nice!
Reviewed By: dje On: April 13, 2005 00:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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very good. it got me reading 'till the end. very few writers can do that... hah! although i had some ideas running when the draft was opened, your description made me just want to read on. good luck on your future works!
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Reviewed By: nhamot [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 19:27 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
um... i didn't even finish the first chapter before i wrote this... i complement you on the suspense factor. halfway through the chapter my heart was already beating like crazy!!!
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Reviewed By: Shadow-sama On: March 24, 2005 20:49 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, that really didn't scare me but its really hard to freak me out by words ^^;; but i love the story, such a unusual way to go about writing it.
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Reviewed By: Drof On: March 06, 2005 18:27 EST
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WOW!!! Coolies!!! You right really good, Fanilia!!! This is AWESOME!!!
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Title: Scared the living ghost outta me
Reviewed By: devildice708 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 19:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now that's scary.That scared the living ghost outta me, and outta my shoes and outta my socks. That's got me running to grab my blankie...not like I have one... but if I did I would get it and hide under it in a fetal position telling myself that it isn't real--its that scary. Seriously, I hope you write a whole lot more like these. Peace!
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