| "Sweet Temptation" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: German Cow On: September 12, 2004 02:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic. xD You kept everyone In-Character very well. o_O When I read the summary of this fic, I was a bit worried Kaiba would be.. somewhat.. fruity. But as I've seen, this isn't the case at all. =) Keep it up, I'll be checking regularly!
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Title: good start
Reviewed By: reene On: August 26, 2004 23:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pretty good start- Don't go deleting it. Seto X Serenity fics are usually hard to write- on to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: neon green jesi On: August 26, 2004 16:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
great fic-you capture kaiba's jerkly-ness just right
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