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| "Yu Yu Hakusho Re-Written: Journey to Maze Castle." Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Toguotheman On: April 07, 2005 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I admit that I was amused by Kat's rambling more than once. However, alot of times it seemed unecesary. And I can tell from your personification of Kuwabara that your not a big fan of him. Nothing wrong with that. The changes to the orriginal story was acceptable. However, you removed the famous "Depends on which finger I use." scene. I cannot ignore that. My whining aside, you made a decent story that entertained me thoroughly. Splendid job.
| Reviewed By: Realdrawer80 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 18:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
Script-fic is writing but FFN is asking for prose (paragraphs); not script (drama). Script-fics are meant to be acted out, not read.
| Reviewed By: Realdrawer80 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 19:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
This brought tears to my eyes.
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