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Reviewed By: buenagirl13 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 12:03 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Oh yeahhh... very well done... your first fic, huh? I would have never known by reading it. Love it. Keep it up. Can't wait to see where this one goes... ^_^
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Reviewed By: Jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 21:43 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is starting out interesting! Looking forward to seeing where you take this. Oh, and not that I'm trying to influence pairings here, but I'm a HUGE Yohji/Aya fan (*grin*)
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Reviewed By: Vampire Louis [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 05:33 CST Comment/Review: *squeaks* I must know what happens! The chapters are so short o_o they only give you a taste of what is to come and then leave you hanging. *pouts* Please continue... I want to know if Schwartz can pull off saving Weiss and what will Weiss' reaction be? o.o Will they help Schwatz? Can former enemies get along? Merr please continue! -VL
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Title: EXCELLENT START Reviewed By: jin-i-seid [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 01:12 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: wow! this fic is awesome! i can\\\'t wait to read more! i luv ur writing style!~so fast paced, not dull, and interweaving past with present, and real with imagination. very commendable work!~hope u update REALLY soon, and get more reviews!
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Title: EXCELLENT START Reviewed By: jin-i-seid [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 01:12 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: wow! this fic is awesome! i can\\\'t wait to read more! i luv ur writing style!~so fast paced, not dull, and interweaving past with present, and real with imagination. very commendable work!~hope u update REALLY soon, and get more reviews!
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