| "No touchy touchy" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Reviewed By: GracieStanton On: November 07, 2004 13:29 CST
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what the hell happened with my last reveiw?! haha ok... awsomely awsome story!you gotta use more commas, everything can have a different meaning without them. thank you soooo much for updating!!!!
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Reviewed By: Gracietanton On: November 07, 2004 13:27 CST
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Reviewed By: Inu_obsessed_chic27 nsi On: November 03, 2004 18:31 CST
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I thought that was pretty, good, although I've only read the first chapter. Your italics and paragraphs are slighly confusing and I thought it was hard to read. I like parts, of it, but it's kinda ooc. I'll read a little more and try to get back to you. Ps. I'm not trying to sound insultive!
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Reviewed By: MyogaM34 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 15:41 CST
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Great story so far!! Update as soon as you can!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: lemon-lover On: October 20, 2004 16:47 CDT
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awesome lemons......... loved the one in the bathroom.......... update soon....... the only thing that bothered me is that no one in there right mind no matter how bored they are will try to solve a murder case for fun........ but this is fictional so i guess its ok
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Reviewed By: Miko no Tears, too lazy to login On: October 18, 2004 15:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
soo, what would it take for anouther chapter? i realize the real life is a pain and that might stop u for a while, but this is really a fantastic story. evil grin, i loved when u said there would be a lemon for chapters 2 and 3 and it turned out to be Sess and Rin, that was great, evil grin still. i cant wait for the next chapter and hope Inu gets it together! Anendee
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Reviewed By: Gracie Stanton On: October 15, 2004 11:59 CDT
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good! You really are making kagome look like a slut... maybe you should lighten up a little? anyways great story!! awsome plot... keep on writing!
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Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 20:14 CDT
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intense story........... i'm doing the same in my inuyasha fanfic with the whole dates thing..... we have different story lines don't worry..... update soon
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Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 20:14 CDT
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intense story........... i'm doing the same in my inuyasha fanfic with the whole dates thing..... we have different story lines don't worry..... update soon
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Reviewed By: Kageko On: October 11, 2004 12:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is so freakin great!!!i can't wait to read the rest!!!!!
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Reviewed By: skeezo On: October 03, 2004 00:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok i liked this chapter alot well of course because it was a lemon but that is besides that point i really hope you update faster or better yet hurry and finish and of couse not leaving it half assed it good too but then everyone likes a finished story but i believe you will finish this in the next month or couple of weeks hopefully thanks for letting me talk so less of me talking and more of you writing ok thanks bye
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Reviewed By: SquirrelzOfTheDamnedz On: September 29, 2004 15:06 CDT
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This sounds like the fantasy of an unloved fat, pimple faced loser.
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Reviewed By: GEGIN On: September 29, 2004 13:29 CDT
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club banana is from kim possible
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Title: No Touchy Touchy
Reviewed By: Inu Baby 18 On: September 28, 2004 19:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome story i loved it!!!!
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Reviewed By: gegin On: September 28, 2004 10:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This Sesshoumaru finds this to be one of the best fics he has ever read.
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