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Reviewed By: ~sarah~ On: December 13, 2004 15:35 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is seriously shit. The story sucks and i found extremely hard getting through the first chapter, so i didn't. Kagome faster than Inuyasha, what the hell are you smoking! And Kagome beating on Inuyasha so he falls to the floor HA. This fic sucks so bad it makes me want to cry!. Do us all a favor and give up on this story or make some SERIOUS changes to this piece of shit you call a story. Man people who can't write like you really piss me off. And another thing in your fic send Kagome to some anger management classes, cause she really seems to need it. Ugh this piece of shitty crap is really pissing me off!
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Reviewed By: smartazz405 On: December 12, 2004 22:08 CST
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wow...nvm...i'm sry...i still liek ur writing an all...but i fuckin hate that chap. for the love of god why the fuck wuld u make her go out an sleep with kouga? i really hate that guy. u really like messin with inu dont u? lol oh well ur the author.
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Reviewed By: smartazz405 On: December 12, 2004 21:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol what i like the number 9. newayz i dun visit this site to often so i gess i'm not to sure bout how all dis stuff works but i really liked ur fic so i thought i'd review. lol ur pretty tuff on inu huh? its fuckin hilarious. but hey why was kag gettin all pissed off wen inu started dancin wit da kikyo or watever wen she was already dancin with kouga (i really fukin hate them...) newayz yea ur fic is badass so far an i still gotta finish it. ya i'm done now. laterz.
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Reviewed By: Ikahen Naomi On: December 10, 2004 00:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm only on the first chapter, but the main thing that bothers me is the poor punctuation. I hardly see any commas at all, and they would greatly improve your story. And also, when you're using dialouge, separating what each person's saying through paragraphs would make it less confusing to tell who's talking. And that's about it. You're plot and concept is really nice so far, maybe even a bit unique. However, I do think you've made Kagome a bit too OOC... but that's just my opinion. =)
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Reviewed By: Miko no Tears and Aya (not logged in) On: December 06, 2004 15:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantabulous! i fell behind, if i hadnt, i think i would have tried to send u a nasty virus or something for killing off Kagome (just joking), wow, you wrote this very well! Its hard to not write a chara ooc because every one has a siff POV on the chara, but you made this believable and intense! i loved this story!
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Title: Great Job !!!!!
Reviewed By: Foxfire_14 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 01:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a really awesome fanfic , great job !!! I loved your story and you should make a story were kagome turns into a hanyou , it would be awesome ! Great job , much love to ya =)
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Reviewed By: jtcl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 09:46 CST
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I am happy you dont kill kag I hope you up date soon.
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Reviewed By: omegafl1p On: November 13, 2004 19:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
............u killed the 1 of the best characters in the story....... r u reatarded!?!?! this better be a sick story twist jus to make us readers think to hard or else......jk good story other than that last part. keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: jhygdjghj On: November 12, 2004 21:16 CST
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would any girl put up with a guy who had the biggest ego ever and destroyed their shit??? No so why the hell would a guy we wouldn't unless they were that sex starved it justs seems so stupid how Kagome acts if i was Inuyasha this story woulda ended after she took the cards
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Reviewed By: lotaya On: November 12, 2004 15:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
k im still on the first chapter but things were starting to bug me kagome always isbeeting up everyone and im sorry but how she beet inuyasha is so unreal uve mad her too strong and shes been acting like a bitch sorry to say otherwise its a pretty good story
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Title: the title story that your looking for!
Reviewed By: seiyarain On: November 12, 2004 15:23 CST
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nice fic by the way its under the title of From Friendship To Love then the sequel is Then From Love Until Forever by:Author: Inuyasha's Princess17 AN: hello I think I'm going to rewrite chapter 9, later. I skimmed over it and it really was the worst piece of crap I've ever seen! Oh I was wondering if anyone could help me? mentally!? Nah just kidding I read this story on aff.net and I lost the name and the URL. Kagome and Inuyasha were best friends in secret, uh Inuyasha was rich. Lets see Inuyasha was going out with Kikyou because he was being black mailed by her father, Naraku. Naraku said he would show Inuyasha's mother pictures of his father cheating on her. That's all I can remember, I know it's kind of vague but it would be greatly appreciated if anyone could tell me the name or give me the URL! PLEASE FOR GOD'S SAKE, it's driving me more insane than I already am!!! (Believe me you wouldn't want to see that!)
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Reviewed By: kaginu4eva On: November 10, 2004 21:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If this story ends any worse than this i will personlly seek u out adn kill u.....just kiddin but please make her come back!
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Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi) [Mediaminer Member] On: November 10, 2004 17:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i can't believe you made her die!!!! y did you have her die? that was mean why is everyone doing this it's either Kagome or InuYasdha who die and it's really really sad i hope she's not really dead and she excaped! please tell me that's what it is? E-mail me and tell me at MEAN_Punk@kiwibox.com please please please i just have to kno i cant wate anymore! oh and update update update again !!!! ^_^
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Title: Anya say Hi
Reviewed By: KaloBagh [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 17:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is This the fic you were looking for? From Friendship to Love [NC17] by: Inuyashas princess17 Anime: Inuyasha Genre(s): Romance / Hentai | Type: Alternate Universe Latest Revision: February 01, 2004 17:56 EST | Pages: 131 | Size: 642Kb | Visits: 31049 Summary: COMPLETE!! THANK YOU! Inu & Kag have been secretly best friends since they began high school. Now their r Seniors & friendship begins to grow n2 something more. But Inu has a gf.
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Reviewed By: Michi-Chan6 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 10:07 CST
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http://www.mediaminer.org/fanfic/view_st.php/44821 here is the url you were looking for. I had the same problem happen to me with this fic. It drove me insane trying to find it. But then I did.
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Reviewed By: GracieStanton On: November 07, 2004 13:29 CST
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what the hell happened with my last reveiw?! haha ok... awsomely awsome story!you gotta use more commas, everything can have a different meaning without them. thank you soooo much for updating!!!!
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Reviewed By: Gracietanton On: November 07, 2004 13:27 CST
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Reviewed By: Inu_obsessed_chic27 nsi On: November 03, 2004 18:31 CST
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I thought that was pretty, good, although I've only read the first chapter. Your italics and paragraphs are slighly confusing and I thought it was hard to read. I like parts, of it, but it's kinda ooc. I'll read a little more and try to get back to you. Ps. I'm not trying to sound insultive!
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Reviewed By: MyogaM34 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 15:41 CST
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Great story so far!! Update as soon as you can!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: lemon-lover On: October 20, 2004 16:47 CDT
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awesome lemons......... loved the one in the bathroom.......... update soon....... the only thing that bothered me is that no one in there right mind no matter how bored they are will try to solve a murder case for fun........ but this is fictional so i guess its ok
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Reviewed By: Miko no Tears, too lazy to login On: October 18, 2004 15:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
soo, what would it take for anouther chapter? i realize the real life is a pain and that might stop u for a while, but this is really a fantastic story. evil grin, i loved when u said there would be a lemon for chapters 2 and 3 and it turned out to be Sess and Rin, that was great, evil grin still. i cant wait for the next chapter and hope Inu gets it together! Anendee
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Reviewed By: Gracie Stanton On: October 15, 2004 11:59 CDT
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good! You really are making kagome look like a slut... maybe you should lighten up a little? anyways great story!! awsome plot... keep on writing!
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Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 20:14 CDT
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intense story........... i'm doing the same in my inuyasha fanfic with the whole dates thing..... we have different story lines don't worry..... update soon
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Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 20:14 CDT
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intense story........... i'm doing the same in my inuyasha fanfic with the whole dates thing..... we have different story lines don't worry..... update soon
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Reviewed By: Kageko On: October 11, 2004 12:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is so freakin great!!!i can't wait to read the rest!!!!!
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Reviewed By: skeezo On: October 03, 2004 00:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok i liked this chapter alot well of course because it was a lemon but that is besides that point i really hope you update faster or better yet hurry and finish and of couse not leaving it half assed it good too but then everyone likes a finished story but i believe you will finish this in the next month or couple of weeks hopefully thanks for letting me talk so less of me talking and more of you writing ok thanks bye
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Reviewed By: SquirrelzOfTheDamnedz On: September 29, 2004 15:06 CDT
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This sounds like the fantasy of an unloved fat, pimple faced loser.
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Reviewed By: GEGIN On: September 29, 2004 13:29 CDT
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club banana is from kim possible
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Title: No Touchy Touchy
Reviewed By: Inu Baby 18 On: September 28, 2004 19:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome story i loved it!!!!
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Reviewed By: gegin On: September 28, 2004 10:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This Sesshoumaru finds this to be one of the best fics he has ever read.
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