| "No One Else" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Awesomeness
Reviewed By: Caprice [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2008 22:36 CST
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Gosh, Debbiechan, I fucking revere you.
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Reviewed By: fyrechylde - not loggered in On: March 16, 2005 05:30 CST
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*cries* I love it...it makes me wish that Goku had went with Radditz!!! All of those possible futures if he had. Wow. ...he was the tragedy of a ruined, defiled planet; Prince Vegeta was Vegetasei; he was Raditz's home and all he had ever loved. To me, that is the most poignant and beautiful line of your tale.
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Reviewed By: Darke Angelus [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 13:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've touched on many aspects of Vegeta's service to the icy tyrant that I also believe in: His abuse, malnourishment, and border-line madness. The angle you took of Radditz' loyalty stemming more out of affection was intriging. Very well done. One to the next one...
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Reviewed By: Evil Ssint (not signed in) On: August 28, 2004 15:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And once again I'm amazed by how well you write. I think you really nailed how it had to feel for both Raditz and Vegeta to have lost their world. This whole fic is juts so painfully real, plus it's the first non-squicky, truly believable Raditz / Vegeta yaoi I've ever read… oh and I love how you worked that little picy in so beautifully as well ^_^ Awesome job Debbie!... Now how am I going to survive the wait for that B/V of yours >_
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 00:05 CDT
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Yummy!!!! And it included my favorite Saiyan. Now I feel bad because he's going to die after being so excited over the prospect of finding his brother. Very well written. Highly Enjoyable. Thank You for Writing. -El-
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl - logging in is for wimps! On: August 26, 2004 19:57 CDT
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Very good! Well worth waiting for - so glad you kept the Radditz perspective in there! I like how you changed his voice too - a big improvement. I always assumed that Saiya-jin would be natural potty-mouths... :D Poor Raddykins - the sudden realisation of his love for... *Don't call him troll boy, don't call him troll boy*... Tro, erm, Vegeta and then Piccolo and Goku gang up on him and kill him! *Sobs* Eh, being a handsome, sexy warrior isn't all it's cracked up to be at times...
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Reviewed By: rena 'sama' On: August 26, 2004 19:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really great! Especially for your first yaoi fic. I so rarely read any fics from Raddiz's POV, it was a refreshing change. I also really liked your portrayl of Bejiita's character, and the whole Furiiza / saiyajin humiliation situation through Raddiz's eyes. It's nice to see things from someone else's perspective,(not just Bejiita) for once. I also enjoyed your writing style. Fluid and slighlty poetic, but not flowery. Very realistic. Good job ^^
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