| "We've Been Here For So Long" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2008 05:14 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful story... really liked it... good job... great work...
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Reviewed By: yoshi_apple [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 17:32 CDT
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Nice fic. Enjoyable read. The ending seemed a bit abrupt, though, and I felt like the last chapter should have just been a turning point for another section in the fic. What happens afterwards? You skipped out on the best part. I agree with the other person who said there were some spelling/grammar mistakes but it wasn't too bad. I'm not quite sure what the purpose of 'Amber' was, because she didn't seem to play too big of a role, but perhaps I missed something.
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Reviewed By: erm.. On: August 27, 2006 05:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
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there are a lot of grammatical problems, and, i can see where you were trying to go with it, but it came off a little awkward. the ending was too abrupt and rushed. the characters were OOC and...i honestly dont mean to be mean but a touch up would really help it. i read it through to the end, but i was tempted to stop halfway through. you just blew off kouga's reaction way too easily. sorry! but good luck.
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 12:38 CDT
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um...lol, this is the wrong story i reviewd..lol gomen!!!! I havent started on this story as yet
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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 14:03 CDT
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That was just so sweet! I was kinda hoping for a girl but i am sure the boy is cute!!! I am sad that this fan fic is over.. =( Great job on it though it was really good!
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Reviewed By: AshliPride [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 15:20 CDT
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dis story i so KOOL! =D yay! U ROCK!
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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 21:18 CDT
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yay!! kagome's having the baby!! keep writing, i would love to see how this turns out!
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Title: angle54
Reviewed By: angle54 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 22:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is so good i just spent most of my day reading this from beginning to end it's so good please update soon.
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Title: Ouch
Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou - not logged in On: April 04, 2006 20:57 CDT
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The poor girl. And I bet next she will be yelling at Inuyasha. Although according to my mother, who had 4 children "TV over dramatize labor," But then she changes the subject when we bring up the discovery channel shows. Great job, hope for more soon.
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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 00:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is really good and captiviating. I found myself feeling along w/ all the chars. please keep writing, i have to know if she has a boy or girl and if she and inuyasha finally tie the knot.
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 17:27 CST
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Ahh, they are so cute together. Lets see stalling Kagome. Nag her into an alley and kiss the day lights out of her. But then something tells me that you aren't going to let them do that. Shucks. Anyway update soon.
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Reviewed By: cyberdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2005 14:42 CDT
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where's an update. Please don't say that you've just given up on this story. Please update so that we can see what happens next. You have a good thing going and i don't want to see you ruin it by not updating.
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Reviewed By: animemaster168 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 21:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the style of writing but i really did not like the enrolment of Koga and his now to be born child at all. I really would have had Kagome abort the child and not let her keep it. You have to think about this, you could have had it lilke this, Inuyasha tells kagome to make a choice on either keeping the child or no and Kagome says no because it will cause her problems and if it were ever to be born and live it would have a really rough and unwelcomed life. After that, you could have Koga come after her for getting rid of the child and Inuyasha beats him up and he then leaves. Inuyasha then tells Kagome that he love her and Kagome is left deciding to give up on love forever or to return Inuyasha's love with her hidden love for him. That is how i would have set up this story line. But still it does have a good comprehension of the characters and it shows what they all are like. It is an OK story in my books but not one that would really spark my intrest.
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Title: review
Reviewed By: Orb On: March 26, 2005 20:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww yay, I'm so happy for them. I hope things work out. It could be quite comical to see them living together. Not just cuz their living together, but because Kagome's pregnant and super emotional and stuff. I hope you can update soon. Take care!
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 20:31 CST
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Well, could Kagome be getting over the emotional part of her pregnancy and the morning sickness together? I sure hope so. I hope that the gang shows her soon that to depend on others is not a weakness or being selfish. Hope you can update soon, later.
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