| "We've Been Here For So Long" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Title: Ouch
Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou - not logged in On: April 04, 2006 20:57 CDT
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The poor girl. And I bet next she will be yelling at Inuyasha. Although according to my mother, who had 4 children "TV over dramatize labor," But then she changes the subject when we bring up the discovery channel shows. Great job, hope for more soon.
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Title: elenacala
Reviewed By: elenacala [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 00:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is really good and captiviating. I found myself feeling along w/ all the chars. please keep writing, i have to know if she has a boy or girl and if she and inuyasha finally tie the knot.
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 17:27 CST
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Ahh, they are so cute together. Lets see stalling Kagome. Nag her into an alley and kiss the day lights out of her. But then something tells me that you aren't going to let them do that. Shucks. Anyway update soon.
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Reviewed By: cyberdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2005 14:42 CDT
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where's an update. Please don't say that you've just given up on this story. Please update so that we can see what happens next. You have a good thing going and i don't want to see you ruin it by not updating.
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Reviewed By: animemaster168 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 21:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the style of writing but i really did not like the enrolment of Koga and his now to be born child at all. I really would have had Kagome abort the child and not let her keep it. You have to think about this, you could have had it lilke this, Inuyasha tells kagome to make a choice on either keeping the child or no and Kagome says no because it will cause her problems and if it were ever to be born and live it would have a really rough and unwelcomed life. After that, you could have Koga come after her for getting rid of the child and Inuyasha beats him up and he then leaves. Inuyasha then tells Kagome that he love her and Kagome is left deciding to give up on love forever or to return Inuyasha's love with her hidden love for him. That is how i would have set up this story line. But still it does have a good comprehension of the characters and it shows what they all are like. It is an OK story in my books but not one that would really spark my intrest.
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Title: review
Reviewed By: Orb On: March 26, 2005 20:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww yay, I'm so happy for them. I hope things work out. It could be quite comical to see them living together. Not just cuz their living together, but because Kagome's pregnant and super emotional and stuff. I hope you can update soon. Take care!
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 20:31 CST
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Well, could Kagome be getting over the emotional part of her pregnancy and the morning sickness together? I sure hope so. I hope that the gang shows her soon that to depend on others is not a weakness or being selfish. Hope you can update soon, later.
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Reviewed By: Orb On: February 02, 2005 18:50 CST
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Aww maybe that will work out for them. Plus it could maybe lead into Kagome and Inuyasha maybe getting closer like Inu's boos was talking about? *wink wink* Great chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 20:07 CST
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Wep, Miroku had a good idea. Or was it Sango's, maybe Inuyasha's? Hehehe So just how is Inuyasha going to break this new idea to Kagome? Hope you update soon, later.
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Reviewed By: Orb On: January 23, 2005 19:49 CST
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Yes, I hope Amber totally tells on Kouga and something BAD happens to him. I'm happy Inuyasha finally got to hang with Kagome tho, even if she was sleeping the whole time. Can't wait for another chapter, it's so great!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: jeffsangel619 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 22:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this damn story. I seriously cant get enough. wow.....i sound like a stalker...
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Reviewed By: MyogaM34 (not logged in) On: December 13, 2004 13:52 CST
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OMG!! Please don't let Inu Yasha disown her again!! Please Update Soon!! I may not like the fact that kagome is pregnant, but I like the way the story is going. Keep up the good work!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: [formerly]Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 14:05 CST
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aahhh!!! OMG, well we knew she was pregnant but still. Uh oh what will Inuyasha do? I hope he doesnt freak out at Kagome, that would be just tooo dramatic lol. I cant wait for another upate ^.^ Take care.
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Title: I love this story!!!!
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 13:03 CST
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I love this story so much! I can't wait to find out what happens with this baby. Will Inuyasha help her take care of it, will she miscarry, will she choose to abort. I can't wait for another update!
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Reviewed By: animebaby1686 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 11:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love ur story! it rocks so hard!
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