Reviewed By: KittenEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 20:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome poems! The one from Kai's POV though, I nothed there's a few stolen lines in there... 'Never was and never will be, you'll never know how you betrayed me' From Evanescence's 'Everybody's Fool' I don't like when poets d that... you should change it to something lik... ' I never was what you though of me, I'm just not perfect why can't you see?' Or something like that. (If you want you can take that line, I don't care, HAPPY BIRTYHDAY! There a gift!) Well Luv ya tonz, ~||*KittenEyes*||~ ps. If ya want a shot at getting the Bishi you love sheck out my story 'Fangirl Fantasy'!!
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