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 Title: Cruel Summer
Reviewed By: Kagome Avalon [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 05, 2009 19:11 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great story. I wonder how Tori will take the news that his sister is now dating Yue and that she is no longer "innocent" because of him. Also, does he know that he has his powers back? I look forward to reading more Cardcaptors stories. I like Sakura/Li, Madison/Eli, and especially Sakura/Yue.
 Reviewed By: yumemiruhito  On: June 04, 2007 22:00 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow i really liked it, me not being one that often does not read CCS fics. i really dont know what more to say, it was very very nice. i dont really know when you wrote this, to lazy to look, but i'm guessing sometime last year.. right? um.. i would really aprecate it if you could send me links to your other stories if there are any. i often read fanfics and from time to time origs... and i really enjoy the way you write, it's not dry like others. and it doesn't make me want to kill myself. :] please write back... my emial is ichigo_lover95@yahoo.com
 Title: Cruel Summer
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 18, 2006 13:44 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
 Title: Cruel Summer
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 04, 2006 21:24 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
 Title: Cruel Summer
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 29, 2005 18:56 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
 Reviewed By: lunayami  On: September 12, 2005 19:39 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this fanfic! This has to be the best Card Captor Sakura fic I have ever read! Lemon or not! I know you said you won't write more, but you're such an excellent author that anything you write should be as amazing as this. Don't stop writing! Even if you don't add on to this one, write another story. You have a lot of talent. Keep nurturing it.
 Reviewed By: Mika Lian Rieu  On: June 15, 2005 17:56 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
It was well done, I like that you made her older. I have read to many were she is still a child when she becomes intamate with someone. It was really cute, to bad you aren't doing another chapter. It wouldn't even have to have a lemon in it... but it is your decision. I never really got into Card Captor Sakura, so I didn't know what Yue looked like. You did an excellent job of describing him. All in all I really enjoyed this.
 Title: Cruel Summer
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 15, 2005 18:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters? Can you write this story on www.adultfanfiction.net
 Reviewed By: Cassial_Darkfox [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 25, 2005 14:26 CST
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I loved this fic. I've read it a few times and never get tired of it. You did an excellent job.
 Title: Speechless
Reviewed By: C.H.A  On: March 09, 2005 23:04 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMG, I love ur fanfic. It is now one of my favourite fanfics. I can't wait until you write another, hoefully you won't let us wait...LoL. Anyway my friend would be glad and excited to read ur fanfic when I tell them how amazing it is. You give a great description, and detail in the story. You're also very talented. It seems as though I'm not the only one who love ur fanfic. Everyone here who has review it mostly gave you perfect and I don't blame them. This is my fist Yue/Sakura fanfic and I also hope to read more about them. well later!!! >(=^.^=)
 Reviewed By: Anata [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 05, 2005 18:20 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This was your first lemon? I think you're joking. In either case, you must have a great deal of writing experience to be able to pull something like this story off. It was incredible, and I am so glad that I found it! This was a great read, and truly heartfelt. I'm not the biggest fan of reading oneshot fanfiction with virgin lemon scenes because it's a..well, pain. (pun intended) I, however, did enjoy this piece, and you wrote the scene very well. I could believe that it was happening, especially with the backstory. You did a wonderful job of explaining why this pairing was possible, in an interesting way, and then led your readers to a dewy climax. I applaud you. Thanks for this.
 Reviewed By: Lady Mokodane  On: February 27, 2005 06:32 CST
Comment/Review:
A good story, I generally don't like non Syaoran stories and you make me want to seek out more Yue and SAki stories! Goodd work
 Title: *Drools on headphones*
Reviewed By: Natti  On: February 20, 2005 21:05 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMG i truly loved this Fanfiction. This was my fries Sakura/Yue fanfic and i truly love it i would love to read more stories by you cause judging by the Lemon in this story you can truly write
 Title: Cruel Summer
Reviewed By: blueyesangel1186  On: February 03, 2005 01:08 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is such a great story, not just because of Hentai, but because of how well written it is. I hope there will be other chapters following this and your one on fanfiction.net.
 Title: Cruel Summer
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 15, 2005 15:36 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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