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Title: hark, the angels sing for inuyasha
Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 01:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
eeeeekkk!!! So good as usual. And how about for the next chappie kag goes out walking in the setting sun and almost gets raped but a handsome young stranger ( Inuyasha ), glides down from a high building while slicing the guy almost killing him and kag is sooo falling for this tall, loud mouth, eeger to please, silver hair, demonic angel that has fallin to her rescue from the haevens above.
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Reviewed By: hanyou_gurl004 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 23:15 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello, sorry it took so long for me to read. Classed are so hard!!Wow! This story is great! I love it! I don't know what it is about AU fics but they tend to draw me in more than the original ones...I think the only original one i truly love is The Lucky Ones by Terri Botta. Have you read it? You should! Anyways! I really like where this story is heading, it kind of reminds me of the romance novels, you know the kinds where the people meet in the most unlikely of situations and they become madly in love. I think its somehting about the fantasy of it all that attracts people, and you do that very well in your stories, especially Just A Note To Say.. I really like how you take the time to factor in each detail and appeal to all of my senses...sorry we were talking about that in English class the other day! I only really have one suggestion... Do you think that instead of having the conversations on one line, could you maybe separate each speaker. It seems a little confusing when everything is all together. X-cellent job and I can't wait for your updates. I totally understand about not being able to update quickly. With college starting I can only update once or twice a week whereas in the summer I could do it sometimes 5 times. I won't be terriblly upset if it takes a while...good things come to those who wait! Signed, Corinthia
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 22:06 CDT
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cools.
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Reviewed By: oashisunoyume [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 18:52 CDT
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wow really good ! cute date for fluffy and rin ^_^ good job!!
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Reviewed By: CoOlChIcK [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 15:34 CDT
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Also, do Kag and Inu meet in the next chapter. And why are there screennames so long. Also thats a cool way to do the Addidas abreviation. lol ok just thought i woud type some things floating in my head about the story. ^_^
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Reviewed By: CoOlChIcK [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 15:32 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey thats ok I got to go to school also. So I dont get to read as much fanfic as I would like since homework and junk. Bu this is a really cool story and I loved this chapter since it was mostly about my favorite coulple, Rin and Sesshy. But you have to update soon, it doesn't have to be very soon since my mom gets on to me about almost "living" on the computer but anyway yeah Update soon I love this story.^_^ PLease and Thank you
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 01:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
not bad
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Reviewed By: Blue Kisser [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I love this fanfic!Please update soon :)
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Reviewed By: CoOlChIcK [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2004 20:19 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOOO I love this story. When do they meet, I mean, Kag and Inu, I would like to know. uh oh I have to go il leave a better review next time. Please update very very very soon, Like tomorrow or the day after, but soon. ^_^ PLease and Thank you.
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2004 16:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
cools beans.
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Reviewed By: Naotas Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 21:51 CDT
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Reviewed By: Naotas Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 21:51 CDT
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i really like the story! and the apartment wa really cool, except really big for an apartment, and she must be friggin rich to afford a plasma screen TV on her own! OoO!!! But anyway i was wondering if i could use that little bit of info about the highschool years in my fic, since im really trying to get into the japanese culture with that one and its a AU highschool fic.??? OH PLEASE!!! wait a sec? how are you suppose to respond? you could e-mail me at:: Demonchildjr@aol.com:: or AIM:: ShamlessAbandon POSSIBLY THANK YOU!!! ^^ Mia Ikumi
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarugrl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 21:46 CDT
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This is really good i like it a lot ! Update soon !! Please !! lol cant wait until she meets uh the mystery guy lol hopefully it's InuYasha ! haha
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Reviewed By: Inu-Taiyoukai_6501 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 20:32 CDT
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Nice fanfic I hope you type in Kagome getting a boyfriend in the next one And i thought they were gonna have a sleep over and talk to guys online while they look for a boyfriend for Kagome I hope thats a good idea for you Arigato Gozaimasu ^_^
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Title: ME #1 ME #1....i'll shutup now...
Reviewed By: Blackhearted [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 17:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY GIRLFRIEND! WOW ur fics r getting better and better, i guess the saying 'practise makes perfect' does really make sense now...:D anyways AWESOME start on ur THIRD fic and if ur wondering abt the title...it's cuz i wanted to be numero un to review...alrite i won't keep on blabbering to embarrass u Toodles~~~ the one the only TERESA the great
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