| "Internet Connections" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Reviewed By: N20000 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 09:49 CDT
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This is a really good and funny story. I found out about you when you sent a review to "If Only they Knew" under the One Piece section. Anyway, you've never heard of One Piece? It's only the biggest hit in Japan. Anyway, good job, hope to see more.
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Title: inu_pup
Reviewed By: inu_pup [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2005 00:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LMAO that whole "gorgie/inu" thing was halarious and oh so cute!!!^_^ ur fic is really fun *YAY YOU* update soon and i give you a cookie :D
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Reviewed By: Kelly689 On: August 10, 2005 20:45 CDT
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You seem to have trouble with deciding when to create a new paragraph and many are incorrect. Two different people should never speak in the same paragraph. The grammar rule is: new action, new point of view, or new person speaking = new paragraph. I hope this helps.
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 16:28 CDT
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UPDATE UNLESS U WANT ME TO DIE!!!(lmao j/k)XD
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Reviewed By: ruby youkai [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 19:41 CST
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hey review im waiting
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Reviewed By: ruby youkai [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 02:32 CST
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-_- why arent you typing i dont hear the typing (lol) sorry me eating candy and chips REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! or ill shall steal inuyasha muhahahahahahahahahah(cough)ha!!!!!!!!
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Title: hey hey
Reviewed By: ruby youkai [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 02:29 CST
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well it was 1 in the morning and i couldnt find a good fic to read and then i found yours thank you for writing so thing that it finally good!!!!!!!!!!(i mean all those other stories made me snore) well remember to review ill be waiting for u!!! your loving reader(me!) the famous and rare ruby youkai p.s please review~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~
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Reviewed By: hanyou_gurl004 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 10:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey!! Wazz Happenin? I'm soo glad you updated; I only wish it could have been longer! Anyways I really like this story and can't wait for your next update!! See ya soon! ~*Co*~
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Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 12:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was good keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Reviewed By: Blackened_Silence [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 19:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heyla. Again with the point 5 ratings *bangs head on keyboard* Anyways, it's great to read you stuff, I hope you update soon!! Maybe check you my fanfics? I haven't been able to post Dysfuntional Well yat but anyways. Hope to talk to you soon. This is an awsome story, even though it took me forever to discover that chapter 3 was written and all I had to do was scroll down *hits self for stupididty!* Luuuurve, Kay
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Reviewed By: hanyou_gurl004 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 20:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KAWAII!!! This chapter was soo cute!! I love it!! Inuyasha is such a winy baby!! Me and my friends say that...we're nerds!! Keep up the excellent work and I eagerly await your next update!!
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Reviewed By: CoOlChIcK [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 12:59 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"GEORGIE!" That's funny. lol. Seriously. Anyway, Update soon. This story is really good, and why haven't Inuyasha and Kagome met yet. C'mon let the sparks fly. please update soon(er). Ok, anyway, also I jus cam eout wiht my own story, it's my first one actually, and I'd really like it i fyou read it and reviewed.It's called "Secret Worlds". Well you don' thave to read it. ayway, update the stoyr son. I love it. Ok ^_^ Please and Thank You
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 11:16 CDT
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coolsa.
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Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2004 16:58 CDT
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awesome new concept.... can't wait to see what you'll do to inuyasha and kagome... please update
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Reviewed By: NorikuKitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2004 20:10 CDT
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this sounds like it's gonna be really cute! i can't wait until Yasha and Kagome talk on IM :giggle: that should be interesting! Sesshy and rin are so cute :glomp:
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