| "A Shadow in the Twilight" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Nooo!
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 22:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
She can't be dead! She's such an awesome character! More please! I must know what's next. Does Bardock take revenge? What?
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 23:11 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love it! The idea is totally original. The plot wonderfully executed. A fresh new take on characters. Practically Shakespearean command of diction. And the OC is too die for! Please update!
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Reviewed By: Kethry [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 17:31 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why oh why haven't you gotten more reviews? This fic is wonderful. I really like your OC she is too much ^_^ OOOOHHHHHH and your writting about Bardock!!! **drools** sexy sexy sexy Bardock... The plot is well devolpeted(sp) **thinks "and my spelling sucks"** the charaters are well rounded. All in all I am hooked here. I have to say one thing... ROTFLMAO at Zarbon's thought in ch 39 "maybe their ridiculous posing would improve from her choreography " I thought I was going to wet myself I laughed so hard at that! Please Please keep up the great work and keep giving Bardock the spot light time he has earned but very gets! **thinks** you know... my fic has Bardock in it too and I have no reviews... thats just not right the man is sexy and that smirk... **faints** hmmm yeah anywho! Thanks once more and a major thumbs up to you. I will refer this to a couple of friends I have that like Bardock as well. Wind to your Wings, Kethry MoonDragon.
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Reviewed By: Love Of Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 08:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW... you've certainly wrote ALOT! I can't believe nobody's reviewed yet! Oh well, don't be put off, if you enjoy writing it you shouldn't care about what others think. Really love the story though, please continue.
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