| "Welcome To Your New Home" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Blah
Reviewed By: Delusional___So, Antipersonnel On: September 09, 2005 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ouch. The spelling really made me cringe. You can quite easily download a stupid word processor for free somewhere around here. It's really not a very good excuse to just ignore your grammar. I'd also like to comment on the plot... Not quite original. I could not count the number of stories I've seen that are exactly like this. I'm betting that all those extra characters are really just your friends that you've overcompensated for and made into these perfect characters who will eventually fall in love with someone from GW.
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Reviewed By: mrs.minamino On: April 10, 2005 13:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
iove the story but pluez hurrywith th third chapter alyssa. bye bye neko ^-^
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Reviewed By: mrs.minamino On: September 22, 2004 20:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it. hurry with the 3rd chp. please.
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Reviewed By: mrs.minamino On: September 08, 2004 20:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi me again. i love your story, but not as much as i love kurama. please hurry with th story. duoxsagexheero will be such a cute couple. sage is so awsome.
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Reviewed By: Mixed Signs On: September 02, 2004 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved the story. it was awsome. yours truley mrs. minamino. neko
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