Title: WHY?
Reviewed By: BurningTheMidnightOil [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 01:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why did you post this? There are several things wrong with this fiction. 1. WAY too many anime series. pick only two. 2. The spelling is bad all the way though; including your summary. 3. Needs to be beta-ed/Edited. 4. Bad sentance structure and no clear paragraphs. 5. It's extremely hard to read, your words run together: Spacesarenescessary. Just some advice, writing is something that gets better the more you work on it.
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