| "Alone in Eden" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: Utterly Perfect
Reviewed By: IstariKitsunelover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 08:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe that there is someone on God's green earth who can write something so...possesing, so mesmerizing. Your writing is superb. PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: OtakuNi On: February 27, 2005 10:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, and I'm left on a cliff... you should continue. Tohma has just heard what he always wanted and dreaded hearing. (I want to see how he reacts to little Eiri.) (And how little Eiri handles everything.) :) This was a really great story. I actually sat down the whole thing and didn't move until I was done!
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Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: Anna M. On: November 14, 2004 19:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for the e-mail update! I normally don't check my e-mail on weekdays, so I'm sorry for not reviewing sooner. Anyway...This story is just so well written! I've never really have read something quite like this. Like I said in my previous review, it held my attention. THe part where Tohma carries Eiri into his room, and then you left it off at Eiri asking Tohma to make love to him? That was good. I liked the way you built all the tension up to that point, and then left it at a cliff-hanger. That was good. Please let me know again when you update. e-mail: Sir_integra_hellsing@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: hellcat805 On: November 12, 2004 19:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hellcat805: Alright, lemon in the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: cutewhenyouscream On: November 12, 2004 18:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it... and trust me thats an accomplishment.. i dont say that very much! keep up the good job
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Reviewed By: MorbidRomantic On: November 11, 2004 17:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is on my favorites, and I am so anxious to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Anna M. On: November 07, 2004 22:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I really love this story! It's so well written. I found hardly any spelling or grammar errors, which is really amazing since most story of this nature have lots. I have yet to read a story that really kept my attention like this. I don't find it confusing at all. It's got the right amount of angst, mixed in with the right amount of lust and want that kept me guessing (And I'll admit, a bit turned on as well ;) ) Please update this soon! I would hate to see this turn into one of those stories that just doesn't get finished. When you update, do e-mail me please: sir_integra_hellsing@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: DirtyD On: October 09, 2004 19:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Your writing is decent and the idea for the story is original. I like this AU-ish take. Tohma is not my favorite character (for the simple fact he is a sneaky shark) but I like how you've portrayed him. I feel pity for him in a way, amazing. I look forward to reading more, where are the other 8 chapters?
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