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| "Black Lineage" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 > » ] | Title: -_-;
Reviewed By: Ai no Kawa [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 09:19 CST
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I'll try to update....I've been having problems with my harddrive...but I shall try my best to post chapter one! *strangles her computer*
[ Request Review Removal ] | Reviewed By: kyli the wolf hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 01:19 CST
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o just in case u should post this on animespiral.com
[ Request Review Removal ] | Reviewed By: kyli the wolf hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 01:16 CST
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thanx 4 pickin me, hope u update soon
[ Request Review Removal ] | Title: mess ed up on the frist one
Reviewed By: Ghost Cheeth [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 02:09 CST
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BEARER NAME: Camiko AGE: 18 RACE: Chimera( Yes like the one from Fullmetal Alchemist, ) GENDER: Female HAIR: long Black with Creamy bangs, it stops at her hipps EYES: Black with Red inside. BUILD: She is 5\'7\", tan. her legs are powerful from all the runing she dose. A tanish tail and doglike ears CLOTHING: wears a Black tank top with a Black hooide. Jean pants and black and red tims PERSONALITY: A calme girl . She real nice but if you get her mad you may want run like hell.DISLIKES: Being Mad. HISTORY: Camiko was made, she was not bron. She was made from thr black chapter gang but becase she was so wild and deadly they where going to kill her. But Camiko got away and walked around the demon world alone. Demon left and right tried to kill her but every time they got close the Earth would eat them Whole. PAIRING: Kuwbara( I like him!) ELEMENT: Earth POWERS: an move the earth , talk to Animals, and plants GUARDIANS NAME: Ghosiko APPEARENCE: A little girl with long white hair, soulless black eyes and white dragon wings.. PERSONALITY: Calm, likes to have fun like a litte kid. XP LIKES: Camiko DISLIKES: being a lone HISTORY: Half Angel and half dragon. Her Mother told her she was the Guardian of a Demoic Devil, and she had to go find her. One the why Ghoiko ran to Camiko , Not know Camiko was the one she to help. ELEMENT: light POWERS: white magic
[ Request Review Removal ] | Title: Can i be in it?
Reviewed By: Ghost Cheeth [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 16:16 CST
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BEARER NAME: Camiko AGE: 18 RACE: Chimera( Yes like the one from Fullmetal Alchemist) GENDER: Female HAIR: long Black with Creamy bangs, it stops at her hipps EYES: Black with Red inside. BUILD: She is 5'7", tan. her legs are powerful from all the runing she dose. CLOTHING: wears a Black tank top with a Black hooide. Jean pants and black and red tims PERSONALITY: A calme girl . She real nice but if you get her mad you may want run like hell.DISLIKES: Being Mad. HISTORY: Camiko was made, she was not bron. She was made from thr black chapter gang but becase she was so wild and deadly they where going to kill her. But Camiko got away and walked around the demon world alone PAIRING: Kuwbara( I like him!) ELEMENT: Earth POWERS: .( Like what Kurama's powers with plants)
[ Request Review Removal ] | Title: it would be an honor to be in ur fic hope i get picked
Reviewed By: kyli the wolf hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 01:53 CDT
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GUARDIAN NAME: Kyli Minamoto APPEARENCE: Hair midnight blue with silver streaks that reaches the lower back and its in a braid, eyes are sapphire with amber around the pupil, 5'3, slender curvy body, a silver dragon necklace and a silver wolf bracelet on right wrist, and has a katana with silver and dark blue handle PERSONALITY: Sarcastic, carefree, humorous, sorrowful at times but covers it with a cheerful mask, sometimes acts stupid to cheer up the one she is guarding, gets along well with everybody, will do what it takes for her to protect the Bearer she is protecting, can be sweet at times, and also has a bad attitude when angered LIKES: Mexican and Japanese food, likes dark colors like midnight blue, black, dark gray, and dark green, rock, hip hop, dance, trance, r & b, rap, and some pop music, dragons, tigers, wolves, and foxes are the favorite animals, sing and dance when there's time DISLIKES: People with big ego's, traitors, backstabbers, shellfish people, attacking from behind and people who do so, people who smoke, people harassing the Bearer HISTORY: Kyli was created back in the feudal era, by an ancestor of her Bearer(but doesn't know that). She helped guide some of the ancestors and other souls to the reikai then was put into a deep slumber into the abyss to wait until she was needed once more. ELEMENT: Water POWERS: Can manipulate water and create water that's in the air and can freeze the water to make weapons
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Reviewed By: reflectionofamirror [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 19:39 CDT
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NAME: Kaline Kanashii AGE: 17 RACE: Half breed GENDER: Female HAIR: Long straight ebony hair reaching to her elbows EYES: One eye is dark green. The other is grey. BUILD: Multiple scars cut by herself CLOTHING: Dark blue baggy jeans with black Chinese-styled shirt with red buttons PERSONALITY: Kind-hearted, but yet cold and somewhat gothic, Kaline has created a "self-mask". Always kind and smiling around other people, but really is cold and too depressed for words. Music is her life. XPP LIKES: To be alone, loud hard music DISLIKES: Light, falling in love HISTORY: No trace of where she was born. No trace of any relations or parents. It's like Kaline appeared out of nowhere. She had killed every single one of her family and nearly more than half her kin. Thus, her kin put a death wish on her head. Escaping with ease, Kaline took refuge in the human world. But, they are still looking for her head. PAIRING: Kurama ELEMENT: Earth POWERS: Ability to form arrows out of energy; black magic GUARDIANS NAME: Takashi APPEARENCE: He is a solitary young boy (Around ten years old) with long snow white hair falling to his feet. He has violet eyes and always seems to be holding a large book. PERSONALITY: He's really quiet and curious. Extremely idiotic. XP LIKES: Books DISLIKES: The dark HISTORY: He was born in Kaline's small village and immediately became her friend. After Kaline left, he curiously followed her. ELEMENT: Earth POWERS: white magic
[ Request Review Removal ] | Title: sorry it got cut off......
Reviewed By: kuro_mirai [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 12:57 CDT
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(POWERS:) can create a wall of fire that can protect her from her enemy's attacks. CrossFireHurricane with makes a hurricane of fire around the enemy. can make a fire sword with her hands.
[ Request Review Removal ] | Title: HELLO I HOPE I DID THIS RIGHT WELL HERE I GO!!!!!
Reviewed By: Kuro+Mirai=Me!!!!!! [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 12:57 CDT
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(NAME:) KuroMirai (it means Black Future) (AGE:) 16 (RACE:) Demon Fire Fox (GENDER:) Female (HAIR:) Dark Red hair in a high ponytail with light red tips. (EYES:) gold mixed with electric red (BUILD:) she's about 5'6 110 pounds, with a black flame in the middle of her for head she has a red tail and fox ears on top of her head. (CLOTHING:) Dark blue shirt that says "You laugh at me for being different i laugh at you for being the same" with a black coat over it, with dark blue jeans. with chains o n each arms. (PERSONALITY:) sarcastic, never serious, loves to fight, outgoing, likes doing things her own way. she hate getting beat at her own game, but she'll find some way of getting them back , she always has to be doing something our she'll go crazy from boredom. (LIKES:) pulling pranks, cookies,shinny thing,burning things,and not getting caught. (DISLIKES:) getting caught,dull things,purple cookies (shivers),and water cuz it puts out fire. (HISTORY:) She is an only child her parents dead when she was 5. she was always nice to people, But for some reason no one wonted to play with her cuz there mom and dads say that she's a new sense and a bad influence, one night a S class demon started to kill the people of the village she was staying at and when it spotted her it attacked her and she put up her hands to protect her self she closed her eyes waiting for death but it never came . When she open here eye's the demon was dead.(PAIRING:) Yoko Kurama (ELEMENT:) Fire Or Soul (POWERS:[ Request Review Removal ] | Reviewed By: Akki_the_Insane [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 05:27 CDT
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please email me and tell me whethere you will use my character or not! and as always update!^_^
[ Request Review Removal ] | Reviewed By: Akki_the_Insane [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 05:26 CDT
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HISTORY: kokoro's mother was a witch and her father was a human psyhcic(like genkai). not really beng able to take athe child with them to makai, her mother and father left her in the capable hands of her grandmother. her grandma already being centuries old brought kokoro up in the way of sorcery. kokoro's mother was later murdered along with her father by her mothers jealous first husband. kokoro was home skooled and knows of the three worlds, and is trianng to become a sorceress. PAIRING: Jin ^_^ ELEMENT: soul POWERS: spells, weak telekinesis, seals. Untapped: stronger telekinesis, curses, the spirit cry, immense spirit energy. GUARDIAN NAME: inukihaku APPEARANCE: a small horse sized, charchol black, talking dog. with crow wings and orange eyes. PERSONALITY: protective, friendly, intellegent and almost always a smartass. LIKES: what any normal dog would, to play fetch, chase cats, aviod bathes^_^. other then that the same as kokoro. DISLIKES: kokoro's dislikes, plus cats. HISTORY: inukihaku was created way back in the warring states era, by kokoro's great grandfather. she helped guide his spirit to rekai then slumbered in the abyss to wait till she was needed next. ELEMENT:soul POWERS: spirit like invisibility(meaning only people with high spirit awarness can see her) flight, ability to drive away evil spirits with her bark, speed, minor spells, and transparency.(as in can walk through things) if you need anymore info emial me,address is on my biopage! please pick meh! ^_^
[ Request Review Removal ] | Reviewed By: Akki_the_Insane [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 04:51 CDT
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NAME: Kokoro Yokobue AGE: 17 RACE: Human/Sorcceror GENDER: female HAIR:short, off the shoulders,layered,coppery red with bright orange tips EYES: bright purple BUILD: 5'6medium build, shamanisic tattos around her right shoulder to her lower back CLOTHING: off-white tank, tan baggy cargo shorts, red bandana tied around left upper arm, wooden black brown and blue bead neckles, fingerless burgundy gloves, multiple ear piercings, blue and orange striped thigh high socks, bright puple convers, yellow lensed reddish orange goggles, band patched sholderstrap bag. PERSONALITY: upbeat and crazy. she's always trying to lighten the mood and bring everyones spirits up, though she is somewhat immature. extremly clever, caring, loyal to her friends, talks to fast most of the time, has a knack for fixing things, is a remarkably good vocalist, usualy reluctant to seiriously hurt someone, runs/dances around and jump/hops a lot. LIKES: dogs and crows. to listen to rock upbeat music. to paly her wooden flute. To play tag. sake, she enjoys anything with fish, loves the color orange. joking around, to sing and dance whenever possible. and loves to read her grandmothers old spellbooks. DISLIKES: people who use her friends, fake people, rap music with a few exceptions, key lime pie, murder, and hates it when she's sad and alone.
[ Request Review Removal ] | Reviewed By: Setosgirl4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 16:47 CDT
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likes: CATS! b/c well she is part one. she loves to sing and likes to have a little bit of alone time. likes to read and learn Dislikes: people who are cruel. hates roaches! doesn't like whiners. History: lived a faily normal life in makia with her demon father. he was a theif like yoko. her mother was human and died soon after she was born. she discovered her powers when she was 13 and her father was about to be caught. she let it out in one huge blast and has been training to use it better ever since. pairing: now I am sure he is taken but kurama or yoko kurama. element: preferably fire, but I am going to assume that one is taken and go with light. powers: can cause a huge ball of light to appear and it will send out random shots of light. can use her claws to create three slashes in the air that will be thrown at the enemy. (if you need more attacks or more light based attacks e-mail me and I will send them to ya. ^_^) hope you pick me!
[ Request Review Removal ] | Reviewed By: Setosgirl4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 16:33 CDT
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bearer- name: chihiro (not sure if this is a japanese name or what but if it isn't tell meand I can find a new one ^_^) age: 18 Race: half tiger demon half human Gender: female hair: in a ponytail, shoulder length down (most of the time in a ponytail) white hair with black stripes eyes: normally emerald green, when mad golden. Build: about 5'2'' petite and not pale but not tan either, kinda inbetween. nice curves. clothing: sleevless dark red shirt with matching red capris. fairly tight. shoes like what kurama wears. personality: really sweet and kind, but a little on the shy side. makes sarcastic remarks and once you have earned her trust is very loyal. doesn't get mad easily but when she does...look out! (I will have to send the rest in another review!)
[ Request Review Removal ] | Reviewed By: Houshi_Grl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 23:59 CDT
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Name:Nami Seiko Age:15 Race:Shadow/Water Gender:Female Hair:Mid-back length,black with crimson and silver streaks,and is worn down with bangs slightly covering eyes and two long ones hanging in front of her ears Eyes:Indigo Build:5'6,slight tan skin,mild build,full curve shape,belly button and tounge are pierced Clothing:Crimson tight belly shirt with a bleeding broken black heart that says'Everlasting Darkness under it with(men size)low-rise black baggy jeans with extra pockets and rips in the knees and black converses Personality:She is the loner type person she's stubborn,quiet sarcastic,and cold.If you try to get close to she will go off,she has a very short temper.But when she's alone she's calm,mellow,and soft hearted.She refuses to show her true feelings to and around others to her their a weakness.And lastly she's sorrowful Likes:Listening to Heavy Metal,and Rock,writing,singing,drawing,black,dark blue,crimson,and grey Dislikes:People who are too happy,preps,people who talk alot,pinks,yellows or any happy color History:Father was killed in village attack.Her mother sold her into slavery and out of depression commited suicide.At 13 she escape and wandered but was later found by Togoro and trained for 1yr and in that time finding she could harness or summon darkness(or shadow)but later went out on her own but still not knowing how to fully control her power Pairing:Youko Kurama Element:Shadow Powers:Move through shadows,summoning souls(weak souls),blending in dark areas[ Request Review Removal ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 > » ] |
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