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| "Admit It" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] | Reviewed By: Kumori-hime On: September 06, 2006 15:47 CDT
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...I am reviewing. I liked this muchly. At first, I thought you might actually go BakuraXKaiba, which I would not have liked. It all got better right about the time where Ryou kissed him. Really good general writing, but you might want to work on the lemons a bit. ^.~ They could use more detail. (Though you probably already know that.) I'm not sure if this works for everyone, but writing in first person helps for me. You can get in more emotions and such that way. ...Ummmm what else did I think about this... Oh, the thing about the logic behind the dressing room was good. It's always hard to figure out what one would do with 100+ rooms. And I think that he'd have more that 5 or 6 servants. I mean, maybe he's humble or doesn't want to spend all his hard-earned money, but I think he'd need that many just to keep it dusted, and then anouther few for cooking and cleaning up after Mokuba.>
| Reviewed By: Vamp468 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2006 21:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hehe. My yaoi loving little mind went into overload for about ten seconds. That was great. Poor Kaiba though, I'm so glad things turned out okay for him in the end.
| Reviewed By: Malik and Bakuras kinky slave [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2005 23:43 CST
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Bloody HELL !! That was so hot!! BEST PAIRING EVER!!! AWESOME!!!
| Reviewed By: Yaoi Rox Me Sox On: February 04, 2005 20:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok, first off that 10 in enjoyment facter should be an 11 or 12, but the computer won't let me rate that high. -__-;; this story is AWESOME!! and sexy ^^ i would have NEVER thought of this threesome, but it is awesome. you ROX ME SOX!!! anywho, later.
| Reviewed By: anubiset (computer problems) On: December 13, 2004 16:11 CST
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That was great, loved the lemon.
| Reviewed By: Cairyn Sandstrom [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 09:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutly great!
| Title: meh heh
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 18:25 CDT
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I'm cold and this is pretty good, save for those annoying Ra-damed asterisks you kept using in the first chapter whenever you wanted to emphasize something. They're annoying. I get what you mean by using them, but there's actually no need. But that's just my opinion, not trying to cramp your style of anything. What kind of sucky ass lemon was that?! Come on, I'm freezing my ass off, procrastinating on my homework, and for what? A mere paragraph worth of a lemon. Well.. anyway, lol.. sorry if I seemed to bash your fic.. it's just a little constructive criticism. I want an update, and I was going to say something else, but I'm too cold to remember!
| Reviewed By: anubiset [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 12:51 CDT
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Just read, love. Keep going. sorry this is short
| Reviewed By: Haiiro no Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 00:05 CDT
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Update damnit! You just gotta!
| Reviewed By: Sailor InuYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 16:53 CDT
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wow, I can't belive you don't have any reviews yet on this! It's so good! I read this one on ff.n, but I'm not sure if I reviewed it. You only have one chapter on that one, I think. But anyway, good job! I hope you update soon!!
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