| "A Chance at Love" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Anony On: September 15, 2005 15:29 CDT
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I liked your friend's stories, especially My Own Pet. PLEASE have her put them back up! I really loved that story!
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Title: it kool
Reviewed By: DarkRoses On: August 15, 2005 12:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kool i lyke it up date soooooon!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: devotd2sesshy On: April 10, 2005 02:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
like i said. WOW! that is totally awesome. keep writing. i'll be waiting for the next chapter.
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Title: Mhm
Reviewed By: CaribMiko03 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 18:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its not a bad story, but i want to give constructive critism. I think that u should have everything like in one paragraph. Like if sumone starts talking start a new line or the scene changes. It makes it easier to read b/x everything isnt 2gether. I like it tho. U should continue and i hope u take my idea.
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Reviewed By: Phoebe Holly (not logged on) On: December 01, 2004 00:09 CST
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If I give you my email address would you please send me the other story that was up on this account? I really loved it and was extremely upset when it was taken off.
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Reviewed By: Contessa On: November 13, 2004 01:17 CST
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Why can't I find the other fic anymore? What happened to it?
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Reviewed By: anomaly On: November 02, 2004 01:11 CST
Comment/Review:
i'm not really reviewing your story, i have a question. what happened to your friend's story, my own pet? did she take it down or something because i get redirected every time i try to click on the link?
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Reviewed By: Bitchy Goth666 On: September 22, 2004 20:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOUR STORY ROCKS MY SOX SO HURRY AND UPDATE ALREADY!! you might stink at summeries but i think your storys off to a kewl start!! NOW UPDATE ALREADY!!
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Reviewed By: strangeone23 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 00:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yo kassie! megan got me readin' this its pretty good although the 'Proud to be a prep' shirt was a but much!!! rar heh heh and you gotta convince megan to let me correct her story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I mean GAH! that wow...that's an insult to my ancestors ! doncha think? lol this is Morgan btw hehe so yeah what megan said UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!{now I'm going to fill the rest of my quota up with ! so here I go]}!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!ok you know what? i have an idea ,--. { } K, } / ~Y` , / / {_'-K.__/ `/-.__L._ / ' /`\_} / ' / ____ / ' / ,-'~~~~ ~~/ ' /_ ,' ``~~~ ', ( Y { I { - `, | ', ) | | ,..__ __. Y | .,_./ Y ' / ^Y J )| \ |' / | | || \ L_/ . _ (_,.'( \, , ^^""' / | ) \_ \ /,L] / '-_~-, ` ` ./` `'{_ ) ^^\..___,.--` ~Morgan~
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Reviewed By: DeathChildInuLover666 On: August 31, 2004 22:55 CDT
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Hey you how come you didnt update yet??? Come on and hurry up with it will ya!! You got nothin better to do and i know that for a fact.Hey thanks again for dedicating your story ta me and if i ever but 'My Own Slave' up on Media Miner mines gunna be dedicated ta ya my little insperation.Oh and i cant wait to show you the picture of inuyasha and kagome i drew it rocks!! well thats what i think neways!! Neways update SOON!! ~ MeGaN~
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Reviewed By: DeathChildInuLover666 On: August 30, 2004 22:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was really kewl lol! I like your story and i wanna read more of it please!! SO YOU GOTTA UPDATE SOON!!! You hear me missy you better else ill send miroku after you to grope you till ya die!!! hehehehe No i know who you are so ill just have to bug you till you update! Neways i like this story but you should space it out like if kagomes talking and then songo talks sperate them by paraghraphs! Other wise your storys great! ^-^ ~ Your frind, Lucky~
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