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| "Have You Ever?" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: cutelilpuppieyez [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 14:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg this was soo good i felt so bad for Suguru ....:( ! i really luv the pairing of those two and i hope you do more like that! That song has really nice lyrics! good job i really liked reading your fic
| Reviewed By: Innocent_Assassin [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 04:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
awww...poor suguru. It would be cool if Suguru did have a crush on Shuichi. In the manga (vol.7) Hiro did confess his feeling towards shuichi so you're right about Hiro liking Shuichi. Great fanfic, I think you should do a fic about those two olny I think them two make a good couple ^^
| Reviewed By: Reiannah On: September 01, 2004 10:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great everything! And I'm not just saying that b/c I correspond w/ you! This is the first fic of yours that I'm reviewing though. Your writing style is very enjoyable... not to many non-important things so that it bores the reader, but enough to bring details to life. I didn't see any major spelling/grammer mistakes that stood out or drove me crazy, thus the 10. Very original... not b/c of the Sug/Shu pairing... but by the fact that it was bittersweet. We see Shuichi live happily ever after, and yet Suguru takes an unusual risk, gets rejected, and goes home crying. Then finding out that Hiro had a thing for him too... *gasp* Many times throughout your fic, I had to stopped, covered my mouth w/ one hand and pointed at the screen w/ the other. By the time I finished reading, I was having a full-blown conversation w/ my computer. Poor Suguru! I think he needs a hug. *glomps author* SUGOI! It was fabulous! BTW... I checked out your fics on ff.net but unfortunately, I am unfamiliar w/ any of the series that you wrote for... gomen. Demo, that's why I came here... and I'm so happy I did! Only this is, what is this...? *points below text* I have a limit?! *sniff* Demo, writing extra long reviews is what I'm famous for! *pout* This sucks! *sticks out tongue* But I refuse to stop until this stupid letter counter thing MAKES me! So blah! Great fic... I will continue to read other ones by you if I am familiar w/ the series! *huggles and Pocky* ^_^* Rei-chan :P
| Reviewed By: Silverone [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 15:57 CDT
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Actually, I really liked this. I love ShuichixSuguru. I also loved the way you explored Suguru's character and his similarities to Shuichi. I was also surprised by and really enjoyed the twist with Hiro. I felt so bad for poor Suguru though.
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