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Title: hell no!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: silverkitsunelover On: March 24, 2006 21:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hell no hell no that is the worst place to start a clliff hanger(sees crazy fans throwing sharp objects trying to get into writers house) that was wrong i hope you hurry your fans are getting restless9 (some how get cockroach abilities and bring in nuclear war head countdown for 5 hours) you might want to hurry because everyone is getting restless. if you want to be an epal alexandra.barnard@gmail.com
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2006 15:36 CST
Comment/Review:
I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Reviewed By: InsaneKitsune12 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2006 20:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really loved it and i thought it was extremely original in terms of plot and characters! great job! plz update soon! ps: could u send me an email about whether or not ur continuing this fic? jenky7@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2006 16:10 CST
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I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Reviewed By: Hitori no Ookami On: November 13, 2005 17:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really great story so far! but in ch 12, you wrote step-sibling/mother/etc. but earlier on, you said they were siblings. did you mean sibling-in-law, or am I just confuzzled? ^^ love to hear from you! hitori.no.ookami@gmail.com thanks, and write more! ~hitori
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2005 16:06 CST
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Using her demon skills, she turned to Hiei, who she found was an ice apparition, cold looking but not bad looking, spiked black hair, blue eyes, ice itself she thought. His look could rival Sesshoumaru's, she absently thought. /\ || THIS IS WRONG! THIS IS RIGHT! || \/ Using her demon skills, she turned to Hiei, who she found was an Fire Apparition, cold looking but not bad looking, spiked black hair, with a blue tint to the black, and a white starburst. Red eyes, ice itself she thought. His look could rival Sesshoumaru's, she absently thought. You know Hiei is part ice apparition, part fire demon. So he's a fire apparition.
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Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: October 31, 2005 01:28 CST
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This is really great. Please update real soon.
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Reviewed By: french fry On: October 30, 2005 18:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god i love your story so much. i want you to update as fast as you possibly can. oh my god i am just beeming with happiness over this story. i is just so good. I am itching just itching for you to finish the story so my mind can at least have some peace. THis story is just so awesome and just oh my god. please update as soon as possible. just oh my god i am almost falling out of my seat. well bye please update as soon as possible.
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Reviewed By: Silver_Drache(not logged in) On: October 29, 2005 15:05 CDT
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This was a very good ending chapter. I like how you've woven the story together, and how you have made the characters your own. I also like the way Youko and Kagome are acting, although I'm sure your going to get complaints about not put detail into the bathing sceen. I thought this was very good and can not wait until the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Silver_Drache [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2005 22:44 CDT
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Ok, now that I read all of it I got to say that this is pretty good. I really like how you got all of this together, but their is a few questions that I have. 1) If Kagome's dad is a god, and her mom is a miko why were herpowers not prominint in the beggining. 2) I wanted to know if Yusuke was still blood related to her. I had a nice long talk about his and I figured if that was true than Koenma would be Yusuke's cousin, Koenma would also be Kagome's cousin. So Hades would also be Yusuke's Uncle. Oh yeah, good job with the story. Like it a lot.
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Title: Gods
Reviewed By: Silver_Drache [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2005 21:39 CDT
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I know this is only the third chapter, and that you could have explaned this in later chapters but I got to say it. You do realize that Zeus is a "Greek" god. His role is completly different than any Japanese god, and in any of their myths it would be impossible for him to be their. Anyways, even if your saying that he is the true god, then he would have been in at least one japanese myth, especially since he was really self centered. He also isn't much of a guy to care that much about women. He raped almost all of the pretty women he has ever seen. And yes, rape, it was hardly ever consentual. For crying out loud, he turned into a freakin swan once.
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Reviewed By: Kougalover123 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2005 19:50 CDT
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this is good i like i wonder when kagome will tell the others about her being a demon.please update again soon.
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Reviewed By: chibi hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2005 22:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Please update as soon as you can. I really like this fanfiction. It's well writen and the I love the plot.
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Title: HEY
Reviewed By: shiroi hana lover of hiei [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 11:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS WHY DID YOU MAKE IT END SO QUICK AND IWAS JUST GETTING IN TO IT PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE IT!
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Title: HEY
Reviewed By: shiroi hana lover of hiei [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 11:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS WHY DID YOU MAKE IT END SO QUICK AND IWAS JUST GETTING IN TO IT PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE IT!
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