| "To Follow Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: October 31, 2005 01:28 CST
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This is really great. Please update real soon.
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Reviewed By: french fry On: October 30, 2005 18:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god i love your story so much. i want you to update as fast as you possibly can. oh my god i am just beeming with happiness over this story. i is just so good. I am itching just itching for you to finish the story so my mind can at least have some peace. THis story is just so awesome and just oh my god. please update as soon as possible. just oh my god i am almost falling out of my seat. well bye please update as soon as possible.
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Reviewed By: Silver_Drache(not logged in) On: October 29, 2005 15:05 CDT
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This was a very good ending chapter. I like how you've woven the story together, and how you have made the characters your own. I also like the way Youko and Kagome are acting, although I'm sure your going to get complaints about not put detail into the bathing sceen. I thought this was very good and can not wait until the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Silver_Drache [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2005 22:44 CDT
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Ok, now that I read all of it I got to say that this is pretty good. I really like how you got all of this together, but their is a few questions that I have. 1) If Kagome's dad is a god, and her mom is a miko why were herpowers not prominint in the beggining. 2) I wanted to know if Yusuke was still blood related to her. I had a nice long talk about his and I figured if that was true than Koenma would be Yusuke's cousin, Koenma would also be Kagome's cousin. So Hades would also be Yusuke's Uncle. Oh yeah, good job with the story. Like it a lot.
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Title: Gods
Reviewed By: Silver_Drache [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2005 21:39 CDT
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I know this is only the third chapter, and that you could have explaned this in later chapters but I got to say it. You do realize that Zeus is a "Greek" god. His role is completly different than any Japanese god, and in any of their myths it would be impossible for him to be their. Anyways, even if your saying that he is the true god, then he would have been in at least one japanese myth, especially since he was really self centered. He also isn't much of a guy to care that much about women. He raped almost all of the pretty women he has ever seen. And yes, rape, it was hardly ever consentual. For crying out loud, he turned into a freakin swan once.
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Reviewed By: Kougalover123 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2005 19:50 CDT
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this is good i like i wonder when kagome will tell the others about her being a demon.please update again soon.
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Reviewed By: chibi hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2005 22:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Please update as soon as you can. I really like this fanfiction. It's well writen and the I love the plot.
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Title: HEY
Reviewed By: shiroi hana lover of hiei [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 11:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS WHY DID YOU MAKE IT END SO QUICK AND IWAS JUST GETTING IN TO IT PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE IT!
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Title: HEY
Reviewed By: shiroi hana lover of hiei [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 11:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS WHY DID YOU MAKE IT END SO QUICK AND IWAS JUST GETTING IN TO IT PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE IT!
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Reviewed By: sacaku [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 22:49 CDT
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I really like this story so far so PLEASE update as soon as you can PLEASE this story reallu is good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Clutzoid On: September 17, 2004 20:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep going this fic is really really really really good
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Reviewed By: little bit country On: September 17, 2004 20:48 CDT
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Pathetic....The writing...the concept and the pairing.Above all the pairing
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Reviewed By: moga-wachutu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 22:26 CDT
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What was the wish I have to know. update soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Dying to know what happens next
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: September 08, 2004 20:02 CDT
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what?! What did he wish for?!!!! Kagome's where what? MEH!!!!
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Reviewed By: tbiris [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 20:16 CDT
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Inuyasha.... how DARE he?!
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