| "Intoxication" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Rowina On: September 22, 2005 21:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
I read this one a while back--I think it grew on me. Something about the whole bar scene just rubbed me the wrong way. Otherwise, the characterizations and interactions were first-rate, and the yaoi scenes were finely written. It was a bit sappy, but all in all, great job! I love it when these two end up together.
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Reviewed By: lordofthepies On: August 15, 2005 13:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Fantastic indeed. The characters were well written and their inaction was believable, as well as being affectionate without fluff. I especially liked the way it dealt with Vegeta's behaviour. The lemons were really well written, with a good level of description as well. Very nicely written indeed.
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Reviewed By: Lemony Fresh [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omfg dude...i am absolutely in LOVE with this fic...i cried and cracked up and got shocked at the detail! oh man i just friggin loved it...loved ALL of it! EXTREMELY great job! i salute you! Vegeta+Goku forever!!
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2004 20:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm the first reviewer! Yey! So I'm the first to note how well done this fic is--from the jaded post-Buu Vegeta characterization to the tantilizingly prolonged "first time" lemon to the open-ended but upbeat finish. I like my G/Vs without too much syrup and this one had the right amount of real affection without getting all sappy! BIG THUMBS UP!
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