| "Midnight Eyes" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Demonic KareBear On: June 05, 2005 18:31 CDT
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Hello! I am a cridic, well a fanfic cridic really. lol. Anyway what I want to say is I love this story and thirst for it to be continued. You have real tallent when it comes to this. Not many can have the switching POV style and write it very well but my dear I would have to say this is the best I have read in this style in a long time. And Im not just talking about the Kingdom Hearts stories either im talking in all fandom I have read in a while. Contine please.
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Reviewed By: apath45 On: April 08, 2005 17:58 CDT
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YOU ARE A DAMN FREAK OF NATER!!!! AND FUCK YOU BECAUSE YOU DON`T KNOW HOW MUCH SORA LOVES KAIRI ASSHOLE,BUT I DO SO >.< BITCH!
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Title: more!!!
Reviewed By: islanderpryde [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 22:30 CST
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please finish!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T TAKE DIS WAITING I NEED MORE OF YOUR STORY!!!!!!!! its so bootyful!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: zackman13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 16:19 CST
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GOD!!! thank you for that!!! though you paused when it was getting good ¬.¬ i still love you for updating... but sorry.. i gots no ideas for you, can't wait for it though n.n
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Reviewed By: Kristie On: January 26, 2005 01:01 CST
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OMG I love this story it's great you have got to put a lemon in the next chapter and i cant wait to see what happends so update it really soon ok thanks tootles. ~Ris~
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Reviewed By: theoryofangels [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 13:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fwee! This is such a cool story! I can't WAIT for them to get together *grins* Update soon? I'll give you cookies!
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Title: 0_0
Reviewed By: camigirl4k3@msn.com On: November 21, 2004 16:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"I thank everything holy on this earth that I left it open. I leap from the tree vine to the window, praying I didn't make enough noise to wake up my parents.Once inside my room, I pause to listen for the sound of my mother and father conversing downstairs. I breath a sigh of relief when I hear soft snoring coming from the room next to mine." um, I'm not trying to say that this story is bad or anyhting? believe me, this is one of the best I've ever read, and the fact that riku's a vampire makes it even sweeter *insane grin*; but in the fourth chapter he says that his father died...was that just a mistake or did alot of time pass between the chapters? whatever,lol awesome story update soon and I will try not to pick out little small mistakes, i do that to my sis and she hates it lol well neway cya!!
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Reviewed By: zackman13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2004 19:41 CDT
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UPDATE!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: blacksheep [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 05:37 CDT
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it's cool story, but i found the dead dad thing kinda odd because you mentioned that he had one in the first chapter.
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Reviewed By: zackman13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 20:19 CDT
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UR EVIL!!! UPDATE NOW!!! AND WITH A NICE LONG KIK ASS CHAPTER... or ill make george EAT u!!! and he WILL, he'd do NEthing in OCTOBER!!! mwahahahahaa!!! hurry!!!
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Reviewed By: zackman13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 22:17 CDT
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HOW DARE U STOP THERE!!! GRRRRRRRRRRR I SHALL SEND GEORGE TO EAT U IF U DONT UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: Mandeth [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 17:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update it now! It's funny as hell! Go Riku! I love when the slut dies...anyway its funny! Keep writing more I'm dying to read the next chapter.
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