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| "Yugi: King of Sin Lau?!" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: nduns [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 14:20 CST
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It feels great to be able to read THIS again, and I'm surprised that after the 1-2 years I've spent unable to access this site, you'd have more reviews. Anyway, I'm the most recent person to post a comment, so yeah. This is my favorite YGO fic ever written.
| Reviewed By: N2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2005 09:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great story. It's a shame Téa couldn't admit her love in the show, but what are you gonna' do. I don't usually read long fanfics, but this one was worth the three hours I wasted away. I mean, what else was I supposed to do? Go to my job? Cure cancer? I don't have a job and I lack the capacity to even invent a new, more fattening piece to chocolate. This sure was informative and I'm surprised this fic is hardly getting any reviews. Anyway, I know what I like and I LOVE this fic! I mean, I always knew those two would be together. You should seriously concider making this into a novel. By the way, were those cards actual cards from the game or did you make them up? I mean, not that it matters, but... uh.... I'm wasting space, aren't I? Anyway, great job and... my famous closer... read my fics!
| Reviewed By: dragonandswordmaster On: September 02, 2004 05:40 CDT
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What can I say about this starting chapter that was unjustly taken off fanfiction's chart? Much better here, that's for sure. You used a great deal of description in this first chapter alone, then the whole story at fanfiction.net, and that's saying something! Hopefully I'll see more of this, and other stories of yours as well. I don't believe that I have thanked you for your fantastic review on my story, so let me thank you know, thank you very much. I guess I'll see what the next chapter holds in store, because this chapter was awesome!
| Title: BOOYA!
Reviewed By: K.C. Whitestar (too lazy to login) On: September 01, 2004 22:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You seperated the paragraphs from descriptions and 'talking' YAHOO!! It's SOO much easier to read now^_^ Keep up the great work DJ^_^
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