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Title: great read!
Reviewed By: me On: September 07, 2004 12:41 CDT
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i am really enjoying this fic and i can't wait for more! (seriously, i will be checking every day for an update! you are off to a really great start :)
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Reviewed By: indentured On: September 04, 2004 03:00 CDT
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wow! nice beginning to the story! it sounds very promising! i can't believe aya submitted so easily to that harrassment in the bathroom, but hey twas a well conceived scene nonetheless. plz keep up the good work and update soon! ill b looking foeard to seeing the nxt chapter ^^
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Reviewed By: Eclectic On: September 03, 2004 23:30 CDT
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I really like this. I think the idea has a lot of great possibilities and I'm really interested to see where you take it. The characterisation was good and I like the way you're examining the 'dark side' of Kritiker.
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Title: Great Read
Reviewed By: Darkanger On: September 03, 2004 16:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Having read a lot of fanfics along this line, I have to say this one was the first that was enjoyable enough to actually leave a review (I am an artist and not a writer so my critique would never mean as much as that of another writer). Although I really like the writing style and found the characterizations believable and emphathetic. I can't wait till whatever comes next.
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