| "Song of Miroku" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: rommel17 not signed in On: September 03, 2004 17:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I knew you adapted Song of Songs from the first stanza. Nice adaptation. Reminds me of the times when I used that poetry to entice my wife before I came home, though now adays, but you already know that. (Chuckles) Well these days I have been stepping up my counter attacks on the "swift vets for lies". I remember Vietnam and Kerry did us a favor with that Senate speech against Nixon and Johnston's policies. If not for that speech, we probaly would be still fighting that war for no gain. Semper Fidelis.
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Reviewed By: StormAz (not signed in) On: September 03, 2004 09:53 CDT
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PS: FrozenFlare ... have you tried deleting your temporary internet files?? That might fix that problem ... Sorry Jeff ... terminal tech... =\
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Reviewed By: StormAz (not signed in) On: September 03, 2004 09:51 CDT
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Very good! Sango gets the role of the perv huh?? ROFLMAO! Um, does that mean the shogun is gonna put a price on their heads anyway?? :::wanders off giggling some more:::
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Reviewed By: Biggles_from_Adultfanfiction On: September 02, 2004 22:39 CDT
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I thought I recognized the lyrics. Very nice, Jeffs.
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Reviewed By: frozenflarestillcantlogoncauseitsignsoffwhenshegetsonthereviewpage On: September 02, 2004 21:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was good! Pervy miroku lol
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