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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 07:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this. Poor Bakura must be really confused by Ryou now. Don't let what happened on ff.net get to you. From what I have read in author's notes and bios there is a lot of flaming going on especially over Yaoi. I will tell you what I told someone else, those reviewers are jealous because they can't write. If they are complaining about Yaoi, point them to the announcement that it is Yaoi, if they can't read that then they have no right to say a thing. The fics are rated and most authors say if it is Yaoi or shonen-ai so it is their problem not c=yours. Legitimate criticism and hints are different. Just keep doing what you are doing, you are great!! Remember that and tell yourself that every day.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2005 06:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It may be slow paced but it is really wonderful. I hope Bakura finds what he is looking for. Bakura can help Ryou as well as Ryou can help him.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 08:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter. Poor Marik to have Bakura so blissfully unaware of his feelings for him. I hope something good happens for Marik. Happy birthday next Tuesday. Yay for you.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 08:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update. I'm glad you sent me a reminder. I love it. Boys do love to run around half or fully naked don't they. I'm off to read the next chpater.
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Reviewed By: me On: September 30, 2005 09:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! (smiles cheekily) Yeah… I know what you mean, sometimes I have the feeling that my fanfic isn't so good, and then I write down that it sucks too. But when I get nice reviews for it, I have the feeling I have accomplished something, and it makes me want to write more! I really liked this chapter, makes us learn more about our favorite white haired bishie! ^__^ I like the art you made for this fic! Can you draw a picture of Ryou and Bakura together for this fic too?... that is if you want to… Anyways I hope you update soon! ^__^
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Reviewed By: Aislynn G. (not logged in) On: August 15, 2005 07:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Looks like a good fic so far. Try to avoid the "Bakura's POV" type of switching. It brings the reader out of the story and makes your writing more 'script-like'. Also, try (I know it's hard) to avoid inserting 'author comments' as it does the same thing. You've got a good plot line, and an excellent poem... it gave me an idea for a possible story. Have to let it sit and ferment for a while first though...
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 06:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Bakura super thief from the age of 7. Great job. Marik's already half in love at the first meeting. Please update!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 06:10 CDT
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Cool, I didn't realise you were in Australia. I've only been there in the spring, in October. Beautiful place. Love the story and sorry I missed this chapter, I am not getting any notices from Mediaminer so I am behind.
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Title: tis is a good fic
Reviewed By: me On: July 07, 2005 11:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have noticed something by reading all of your Arthur notes. You always bring yourself down by saying your story sucked, while it didn't. I think you should stop with this, your story is great and if you bring yourself down like that, you are not going to like writing fan fictions anymore. Plus if you say your story sucks, readers won't read it. So keep up the good work and make us reviewers happy by updating…and don't bring yourself down like that. ^__~
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Reviewed By: Ryua M On: May 24, 2005 18:13 CDT
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Yay, yay, yay... I'm thrilled! I love this story, even without the yaoi. And thanks for the list of curses, I'll probably start using them... I'm now really, really giddy about the next chapter, hee...
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 08:36 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this so far. Please don't stop updating for the summer. I like the way you portray Bakura's past.
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Reviewed By: Ryua [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 18:53 CDT
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OOOOH! I'm so glad you reviewed my pic, or I never would have found your story. This is absolutely incredible. I'm very thrilled. I like when Bakura isn't completely evil, although the way you have the darkness in his past is absolutely perfect. I absolutely love how he described Ryou; "like looking at death... or an angel" So good! And yeah... I'd like to see some of his work... just cause... well okay, maybe I have a twisted dirty mind. Oh well. I'll be checking in soon, to see if you've updated.
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Title: Ok con't
Reviewed By: Bluelilly1928 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 16:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think that would be cool if you put in a chapter where it tells about bakura's work many fanfics don't do that any more.
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Title: Ok
Reviewed By: Bluelilly1928 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 22:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What do you mean " if you want to see bakura working as a sex slave " ?? and i love where this story is going
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Reviewed By: Innocent_Assassin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 07:00 CDT
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I really like where it headed to! keep up the great work!
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