| "We'll Be There" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Albino_Yaoi On: November 28, 2004 22:45 CST
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Eeek! I have to read more! It's so...so...i dunno, interesting and...different! Must...read...MORE!
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Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 06:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wohie, good ficcie. Like the way Bakura is acting, and Ryou is finally getting a life here. keep it going. No, I really do like this fic. It's fate I'm tellin' ya. MY NAME'S AUDREY TO. Ahum, don't mind me, you get paranoid from not having real friends. anyway, keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Yami_Kari [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2004 14:18 CST
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There are some fic that you like, and some that you dont, THIS is one ov thos fics that you can't get you eyes off the screen its sooooo good, plz update soon! ^^
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Reviewed By: chattabox On: November 01, 2004 21:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG this is realy interesting! ya gotta update this soon ^^
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Reviewed By: Morna Sidonie On: October 27, 2004 13:08 CDT
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I love Ryou beating up Yami!!!!! -ahem- continue the story please that is all
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Reviewed By: michew [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 20:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! plz update soon!!! this is amazing!!!
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Title: Is there a wasps nest in their?
Reviewed By: ryou's kitty On: September 27, 2004 15:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow/This is like so kool.like omg.PLease ignore the girly talk.I've just had a whole bunch fruit loops.um...Ryou isn't sapposed to be abusive.Bakura is.PLease update this as soon as u can.
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Reviewed By: ZZinc On: September 26, 2004 02:56 CDT
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hi, your story gose along a commin line of what may have happind to bakura in his past and why he treats ryou the way he douse now. if you need ideas on wich way to continue your story maybe you should think about a flash back in to bakuras past. it was full of awful things that never should have happind to him... and ever wander what parts of Yamis (pharahos or atemu)are missing? did you know that yamis father raided and killed Bakuras entier village and melted the bodeys of his freinds and family into gold to make the items... and that bakura draged his body out in to the palace courts in frount Yami and Yami put him in prison. many think that bakura becam yamis... slave so say. but if you have any questions about some of the story lines that are most comonly used and tie in to the mongas and anime show just ask me when you next up date and when I see it I can give you anouther review and tell a bit more. note- if you dont update for three mounths I wont keep reading this. the best way to keep reveiwers is to keep updateing... at least onece a mounth so they dont forget the storys name. I am Zinc or Zeb they are my pen names though I dont post any storys here you can also reach me at fawntears@hotmail.com if youd like and I know a great autheress who douse wanderfull storys about bakuras past and how he deals whith his thoughts in this modern world so just ask and I can give you a few referances and you can gain more knowlage about things the storys never realy tell. ja.
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