| "Love And Moonlight" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: DarkAvenger On: May 10, 2005 00:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
too bad not many people have reviewed... it was good except you seemed to change locations at one point. They were outside, then they were magically near a pillow... although, it could be the cold medication just making me see things... who knows... anyway, good lemon. Bravo!
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Reviewed By: Demonic_Kat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 18:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it!!!!!!! You are awesome when it comes to these things, I hope that you write more of them and that you will post them here. I am impressed... and that is not easy to do. Great job! Keep it up! (PS Just use more details... more fun that way.... mmmmmmm lemons)
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Reviewed By: Kikyou_104 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 00:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
kawaii
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Reviewed By: sango-chen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 03:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
*in gollum voice* my precioussssss.... lol, i crack myself up. anywhozle i'd like to say that your fic was awesome!!*bows* and the Bishi Squad loved it too
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Title: TeeHee
Reviewed By: XxTake me back somedayxX [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 22:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought that this was a very cute and wonderful fic. I really think I'm in love with your work. Keep up the great work on your fic. Never stop writing until it loses it's fun. But I did enjoy reading this fic so yeah....woot woot.... XxLaTeRxX
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Reviewed By: Kitten-in-cream-pot [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
They fall asleep on the PAVEMENT??? Or have I missed something? Well, that certainly is interesting... ^.^ I think, the fic was rather short and vague, and the actions were a bit too rash, but it was sweet nonetheless. (I loved the "I missed you"-Part!) Sadly, I have to agree with SkyBaby that it quite seemed to me as if Kags wasn't really enjoying 'it' that much... But - keep writing! It is worth the effort for sure! ^.~
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Reviewed By: SkyBaby [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
not bad, not bad at all. she seemed as tho she wasnt enjoying it tho.
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Reviewed By: LadyMiaka [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 13:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
awww... so sweet. Great job. I take it this was a one-shot?
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Title: YAY~ I'm First~^_^~
Reviewed By: Demonicslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 15:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Extremely Yummy Lemon! ^_^ Excellent! You awesome! It's not everyday you come across a good lemon! ^_~ Love Ya!
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