Title: Puppy Girl
Reviewed By: Lil' Pup On: May 01, 2005 21:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great! No offense, but you could do with updating faster. If you don't, a lot of people will give up on you. Trust me, I write stories on fanfiction.net and when I didn't update fast enough once, I lost a lot of reviewers. Not to mention tha if you don't hurry then you get flames. Shudder. Beyond that, your story is amazing. This is quite easily my most favorite story ever! You would never easily believe that english is not your mother language. I wish I could write as well as you. Sigh. Lil' Pup out
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