| "Unseen Danger" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
Reviewed By: Anaea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2009 04:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is the best fanfic I run into as of yet in mediaminer!!!! and it's been four years since you updated!!!!! AAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! Well, it is awesome though.... and it's the first time I've given straight-10's!
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 00:13 CDT
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O_O KYAAAAAAAAAAAA! *falls over* I cannot BELIEVE that I forgot to review the last chapter! Gomen nasai! I don't know why I didn't do that! -_-0 Sorry, sorry, sorry. This fic is too cool to not get the reviews it deserves... anyways, the scene where Akina met Puu was nice. ^^ It figures that Akina would find him adorable- of course, Puu is adorable. I don't know why Yusuke doesn't think so... heh. I just thought of something from the Tournament's End DVD, where Yusuke's talking to Puu and he says, "What, you'll do it for her, but not for me? You're my Spirit Beast." Newsflash, Yu-chan- you don't take care of him! ^^ Wait a sec- 'Mysterious death'? Long black hair? Indigo eyes? Deep voice? Tall, dark, and handsome? *eeevil smile* Keh keh keh... update soooooon, onegai! That means please... right? ^^0
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Reviewed By: Clairice-Sarah [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 17:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^;;; er,.... i'm sorry for being able to gather things from foreshadowing? LOL. I love this fic. Akina is adorable. And this new guy whose name starts with "k" sounds interesting. He's the pgre isn't he? Or... the whatever it was that found Yusuke. And for hte fallen angel thing *pokies* Yay for Jinni and associates ^_^ lol ha ha okay. Done now o_0 and another question: if they needed to preserve food why waste it on teaching Yusuke to cook? I'm confused ^^"
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Reviewed By: kiune_hanyou(NLI) [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 15:49 CDT
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Wow... been a while since I last read this. ^-^ and it still is the same fun fic! Wheather it is intended to be or not, I find it fun ^-^ Realy enjoyed the chappy, keep going, update soon! ^-^
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Reviewed By: stix On: July 01, 2005 15:28 CDT
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i loved your story. it was great. please add more to this story.
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Reviewed By: Lor [unlogged] On: April 18, 2005 19:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Other than the scattered-ish-ness it was pretty good. I think you just need a new even to come up..... like someone dying =D you know I love you. Ha ha I was in the disclaimer ^_^
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Reviewed By: Clairice-Sarah [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2005 13:30 CST
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........ update!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: calikocat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 12:23 CST
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Akina doesn't seem like a Mary Sue to me. Good job on the ficcy. I liked it. ^ ^;
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Reviewed By: Leala-Chan On: November 28, 2004 12:55 CST
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W00T, another chapter and more Tora XD. She's a very mysterious character.. You must write more.. And I love Saiyuki XD
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 20:03 CST
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Well I'm too lazy to actually study seriously, so- I'm learning from you! Arigatou! ^^ Um- I think I saw on a website that Sarayashiki had a summer uniform and a winter uniform, and Yusuke wears one and Kuwabara wears the other. If that helps at all or anything. Aaaand- MORE SUSPENSE! Grr. Oh well, something to look forward to! *skips off*
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Reviewed By: RoseVixen On: November 21, 2004 16:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a WONDERFUL fanfiction. The only thing I have to mention is that you aren't exactly sticking with your plot ideas. for example, in the chapter before Akina had to go to school you put that she was supposed to meet up with keiko after school the next day to talk, Then after school she went to Tora's house instead and you never mentioned anything about the meeting with Keiko. I just wanted to point out that small little thing, Please don't take this as a flame or anything!!! I REALLY enjoy this story and can't wait till you update!!
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Reviewed By: Clairice-Sarah [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 19:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I GET TO DO THE NEXT DISCLAIMER WHEE!!!! I can right I love disclaimers!!! I can make 'em fun without doing the whole "Liz" thing ::..LoR..::
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Title: w00t
Reviewed By: Leala-Chan On: November 06, 2004 23:02 CST
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Hiiii!! I'm loving this story! And stop being lazy and update or no more anime for you =P lol! Anyways apparently I've lost my job at spell checking lol! Sorry random rambles... It's getting really good, the dream scence wasn't too too bad better than my attempt at romance scenes! Anyways.. Ja Ne for now ^^
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 14:20 CST
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EEEEEEEEP! ^^ (No, she's not a MS.) I lurve this! It's very intereshting. Takai is kind of scary though... *cough* Wow, you know a lot of Japanese. I'm impressed. How long did it take you to learn it? Yeah, Japan's cool. Squee... Um, well, um. Yeah. I liked the fic. It's fun. Oh, and you know that crowd of fangirls that Kurama had around him when he was eating lunch? You probably didn't know this- but the one trying to get a piece of his hair? That was me. ^^ (No, I wouldn't try to do that. I'm not that desperate, lol.)
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Reviewed By: Sun Priestess` On: November 01, 2004 21:20 CST
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Trust me, you have nothing to worry about with that 'threat' of mine. I'm not that fond of violence >_< I tend to have my gory streaks, but that's only in writing. My friends are always trying to get me to see scary/gory movies. Yeah... Anyways! Great chapter! ^_^ I lub atsuko! She's so cool! I just love the whole show! So uh... what's up with the changing of the eyes and the decapitated bodies? >< Adding some suspense ^_^ Can't wait for more!!
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Reviewed By: Sun Priestess` On: October 07, 2004 16:56 CDT
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Don't worry! I don't think it's out of character! ^^ Plus i don't think anyone truly gets them in character, well, except for the creators... But hey!! *poke* Update!!! *poke poke* Cliffies are evil and you're doing such a good job! You better post soon!!! Or else =_= Ok, that's a really open ended threat, because i would never do anything, but still! Update!!!!!
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Title: Muag ^^
Reviewed By: Leala-chan On: October 04, 2004 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Muah this is awesome, great job so far. Can't wait for the next chapter which better be soon ¬ ¬.. Yes the shiftyness is taking over.. Oh and how about letting me spell check before you post next time XD? Great job
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Reviewed By: Clairice-Sarah [not logged] [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
STOP BASHING ATSUKO SHE'S THE SECOND BEST MOM IN THE WORLD! Shiori, of course, is the first. And I can't wait til Hiei comes in. I read that quote on maze-castle. Haha and I read Karasu's quotes. You should make him attack Kurama and have her (can't remember her name but she's Yu-kun;s sis) beat him up!
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Reviewed By: kiune_hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 16:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cant believe no one has reviewed this fic. O.O I think this is realy well written. So far so good. Cant wait for the next update. ^-^ I'll keep reviewing I promise. ^-^
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Reviewed By: Clairice-Sarah (not logged in) On: September 12, 2004 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so what If I'm the only reviewer... keep writing :D me likes heh you should have Yusuke forget that Kurama told him and have him FREAK when she gets home... and then she should witness Kuwa-chan using the Reiki blade mwuahaha i'm so evil... I just wanna see Yusuke make a total fool of himself ^_________________^
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Reviewed By: Clairice-Sarah [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 21:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE GODDAMNIT!!!! Okay love it PLEAS PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!!!! MORE!!!! BTW I love it ::..LoR..::
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