| "Clubhouse Studios" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
Title: Please update soon
Reviewed By: Tikal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 03:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can you update soon, it's been ages. I'd update mine, but i can't sit down and stick to writing at the moment. I'm trying to publish a book but i've a lot to edit. but i'd like to read this story soon. thanks
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Reviewed By: Tikal [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2005 05:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can you please update in the next two days or i won't be able to read it till after christmas. i haven't a computer at home.
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Reviewed By: Tikal [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 08:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really cool. can you update SOON i'm dying here. please update! Or i will control your mind with some form of psychic power i don't have. The story is AWESOME!!! More story!!!
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Title: SWEET!!!
Reviewed By: Tikal [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 02:24 CDT
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She's in it!!! Thank you... but one problem! I'M HANGING OFF A CLIFFHANGER!!! Please post the next chapter before i die of angsiety. (or however it's spelt. 'm dying to see next chapter. nice work, what happened to Hermana anyway?
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Reviewed By: moshpitt [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2005 04:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
now that's a good fanfic. hot sex scenes with not too much of a serious note. i liked it, and i can only pray for more writers like you. hamtaro hentai is the rarest of the rare. as for that person who said this was an innocent website, i dont think sitesthat have "hentai" as a genre would be considered innocent. rock on, kat~!
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Title: this is cool
Reviewed By: Tikal [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 09:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can i just say to those people, you don't like hentai and stuff why bother reading? you think Hentai writers are sick and stuff but just think, if you read it then your sick yourself so you can't say the writers are the only sick ones here. and i am not saying i'm not sick cause i read (sometimes write) this stuff to. i mean, i did write 'can a forced act of betrayal be forgiven.' so stop complaining, it's not dong any good anyway. By the way, Kattx, great story. update soon, k?
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Title: Funny as hell
Reviewed By: Tempesta2nd [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 21:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude this is one of the most frickin' things that I've read in my life. Were did u get this idea. dark red
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Title: I'm soo sorry.
Reviewed By: Cyber Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 10:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Kattx, I'm taking this chance to formally apologize for the awful review I gave you. You see my friend was over, and she's very outspoken. She was using my account, and honestly, most of the review was hers, I just added the George W. Bush thing. I'm soo sorry, I just shouldn't have let her do that. Keep Writing! Cyber Freak
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Title: Stupidhead
Reviewed By: Cyber Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 19:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't really like that. R U a porn addict or something? What a nutcase! For all those who thought that was the most MESSED UP THING IN THE WORLD! Then more power to you to shut these kinds of people down. Now a little word from our sponsers What kind of creep do you have to be to post HAMSTER PORN on an innocent website. Hamtaro was not made for sex scenes. I hate your kind, always trying to twist things in your evil ways.Loser. Peacefully yours, George W. Bush.
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Reviewed By: EBGuy On: February 21, 2005 19:42 CST
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Another good story. However, I can't find any manga for Hamtaro, any tips on what to search for on Google or some other search engine?
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Title: 7 to 8 hanashi no bunseki
Reviewed By: HamujaOukokuHito On: November 23, 2004 22:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-Ch 7- Mafura shows her pissed off side again! Heh, so Mafura and Dexter actually did it before the scene with Hana? Lucky Megane! XD Anyway, what I was wondering what Mafura was planning to do with Dexter's... you know... and yeah... :P -Ch 8- First of all, what's nut meat? XD I wonder if she'll leave Dexter? She's now getting feelings for Jam so maybe-- And why did Kaburu have to get the clamp? Poor Kaburu... Hana and Dexter didn't finish doing it this chapter. Ah, well... And what's with Jam's sunspot? Hmm. Interesting... And the last line of chapter 8: "Release the light!" Isn't that a line from Li Shoran from Cardcaptors? XD -Overall- The spelling/grammer is better for the most part, but I think that it is somewhat getting a little cliche for me. Then again, at the end of the story, I'm sparked on what's going to happen next chapter... Ganbatte, Neko-san! -H.O.H.
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Reviewed By: anonymous joe On: November 22, 2004 02:41 CST
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Very funny. Nice story.
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Reviewed By: Tora-Hamu-Chan-Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 18:24 CDT
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Who'd-a thunk it? Dexter the rhymer, I also was not expecting Bo to show up without his cronies, or to hear that he's whoring them! heh, way to go!
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Reviewed By: Tora-Hamu-Chan-Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 20:01 CDT
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It hit the camera!! lmao!! Awesome she could put someone's eyeout with her guns, wow!
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Title: Chapter 6 Review
Reviewed By: HamujaOukokuHito On: October 10, 2004 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah! I loved the Magic Talking Cake! XD Anyways, on to chapter 6. Spelling was better on this chapter, I can tell ya that. Nice progression with the story, and I liked the mixing of words were good (eg. sexpertise). The love scene was very good. I enjoyed the chapter. Keep on going, Kat!
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Title: ROFL~Keep it up~
Reviewed By: Undercover Ham-Ham Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 14:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice story so far and glad to see it work out for Kousi and Jaja, and the nice teaser with Lapis, very well done lol. "Creamy goodness" rofl, "Bossman" was right, that part was more like comedy then what it was supposed to be. Anyways keep writing and I'll keep reviewing! Thanks for well taking a moment to consider my review as well. ~UHHL
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Title: Fucking Nutcase
Reviewed By: Yami Hamtaro [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2004 09:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was only joking about my last review. Hamtaro Hentai?! Are you a fucking nutcase or somthing?!
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Title: So far so good
Reviewed By: HamujaOukokuHito On: September 25, 2004 01:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, Kattx! Back with another H-fanfic, I see. I'm not really good a making reviews, especially without reading the story in full, but here it goes: So far, the story is creative and fresh (Like your other stories). The style of writing is what I expected from a writer like you. Spelling and Grammer needs some work, but that's ok, it's still understood. Your fic is fun to read, the conflicts blend together and make a great story. I like the Japanese mixed in as well. Overall, I've enjoyed what you've written so far. Take your time and write your story with all your heart. And creative as you are. See you again after the next few chapters! ^_^ Overall: 10/10 - HamujaOukokuHito (aka: ScPpY)
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Undercover Ham-Ham Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2004 16:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What else is there to say about this, except I wish I came up with the idea lol. Anyways this is great stuff keep it up. The relationship conflict of Jaja and Kousi made me think, as to how long this review is. IMHO in what Jaja's logic was a bit well selfish. Sure it wouldn't bother her if he took part in those scenes if he did, but really thinking about it, that does send up a warning sign for how their relationship will stand from it, that could be explored. Sure Kousi went along with it out of love for her, but how does it change their relationship? Will Kousi still feel the same for Jaja because of it? If she didn't go through with it, there was a chance from what she said that them as a pair would be changed as in perhaps break up. Maybe she's right either way, even for letting Kousi getting that first time with her, changing something that should be mostly shared only by them for something for the sake of friends, isn't exactly something that sits well with most, because that treads on the specialness of relationships. Ribon may face the same dilema in how it turns out from conflict with perhaps Hamtaro and Taisho. Another intrest to perhaps explore is whether or not Jaja will take to Kousi in action with another, that conflict could be explored in where their relationship goes. I feel when it comes to it, she may feel how he did, and I ask will she or won't? How complex you make the story determines if they remain together. As for Hamtaro, Taisho and Ribon I wonder.
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Reviewed By: Tora-Hamu-Chan-Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2004 17:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is the first hentai with Lapis, she does look like she needs a good fuck.
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Title: Ok
Reviewed By: Yami Hamtaro [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2004 14:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Tora-Hamu-Chan-Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2004 20:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
NYAAA!!! Aibon and Tongari! or.. Mari and Aibon and Tongari XD
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