| "Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: GWolf On: April 24, 2005 17:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow that sucked amazingly!
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Reviewed By: taiketsu On: October 18, 2004 17:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
There are a couple of things: First you need PARAGRAPHS!!!! Makes it easier to read, and secondly... :D you made beast boy's manhood so small. I would laugh at him if i was raven. other than that.. good job
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Reviewed By: David F [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2004 02:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yea it's pretty good but hard to read because of the lack of order.
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Title: Summuary
Reviewed By: Tat On: October 03, 2004 22:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry but I have to say this about your summuary. That's great. I acttually laughed when I saw it. Demo, I think you should give a small bio on what it is about or atlest say what the pairing is.
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Reviewed By: bonekhan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 18:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice dexriptions. Heard of paragraphs though?
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Reviewed By: bonekhan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 18:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice dexriptions. Heard of paragraphs though?
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Reviewed By: kawaii yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 19:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
huh..wait why didn't they have to breath was it a dream or something
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