| "Who You Really Are" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: ChellieGurl On: October 02, 2005 15:28 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a good idea, but it is really lacking details, plot is sketchy, and the characters are out of context with the show.
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Title: Who You Really Are
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 13:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Beware the evilness of Coke!!!
Reviewed By: Daredevil_Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 01:05 CST
Comment/Review:
ICKY ICKY ICKY!!!! Naraku Rape.... *shudder and vomit* hehee.. that's about all I can say. Keep going pleese!!
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Reviewed By: turtleyoukai On: November 29, 2004 13:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very interesting. i need to know what happens!!!! my curiousity is getting the better of me. *sigh* any ways good story! pleae hurry and update. *sniffle* :)
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Reviewed By: sha kenren [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 10:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more, and the longer the better. you have a great story line going, please continue it quickly!!^_^
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Reviewed By: inuyashasfavegirl On: November 01, 2004 20:01 CST
Comment/Review:
i agree with them.....but i still love it....keep updating...good job!
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Reviewed By: inubrat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 16:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
write more please with longer chapters
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Reviewed By: Daredevil_Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2004 03:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
hi I really like the concept of the story, it has a good idea. I like it but I would love it if there was a bit more explanation on how all of this happened to Kagome and why Inuyasha is accepting of it. Other than that, I think you have a good story idea going on.
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