Reviewed By: earthmonkey On: June 05, 2005 00:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Where to start...well, only problem I really saw was where you forgot to bold one of George's VOs. It was well done (far better than I've posted @ the other site) and lots of good uses of anime references. This "John" at the end in the notes...that me? If so..I forgot what I called the goth chick. I know Mason's ex-g/f in the 60s I named Brie (short for Brianna). but John is a popular name...anyhoo..great fic> ^.^
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