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Reviewed By: Aitu- never signed in? On: September 12, 2004 16:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! Those were two amazing chapters. Loves it. 10's all around! Loved the focus on Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship, hehe. And thanks for reviewing on my story too! Such sweet words-- Yep- it's coming along slowly but hopefully I will finish it one of these days. Well your story is coming along fabulously. The writing is great and I just adore the story line. Keep up the great work! hehe buh-bye now! ---Aitu
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Reviewed By: Kestrel Moonhaven On: September 12, 2004 08:24 CDT
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I love this chapter. Who wouldn't want to sleep with him, eh? Great job!
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: September 10, 2004 18:15 CDT
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hehehehehehehe. Great chapter! I ADORED the fireman part. I swear to god, me and some friends were just talking about firemen last night. hehehaha. I still cannot think of another nickname for Inuyasha... hmmmmm... Can't wait to see what else happens between those two! Keep up the great work!!!
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- nsi On: September 09, 2004 15:41 CDT
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YEY! You update fast! Loves it!hmmm, a nickname for Inuyasha... *contemplates* I can't really think of any right-- but if I do I'll definitly get back to you on that one. great chapter, by the way. I enjoyed it and I really like how your characters seem to be realistic with their thoughts and with their actions. The way you have everything set up makes them more beleivebale. Keep up the great work and Ihope to read more from you soon!
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 12:01 CDT
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ouuu! Two new chapters. Things are really getting interesting really fast! I love all of the interaction between characters and the nicknames, hahaha. Boomerang girl?? lol! Is Sango Austrailian or something? Wow. Loves it. Great lines in there especially with the references to J.lo and Benifer, hehe. Once again, amazing work! I cannot wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Kestrel Moonhaven On: September 09, 2004 02:36 CDT
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Yep,it's me. Back again with a lovely review! Love this story. Awesome!
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Reviewed By: Newfan On: September 09, 2004 00:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"EW you want J. Lo's sloppy seconds!?" Ohjoy, girl, I NEVER laughed so hard in my life! This story is awsome! Please keep up the great work, and I hope that my review has, indeed, made you smile! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 20:27 CDT
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so damn funny. luv it! update asap! *Cat*
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 23:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVES IT! hehehe. Very interesting start, to say the least. Ah, I love Paris, who would want to leave? lol. Please say that she came back with some great clothes, hehehe. Well, after two chapter, that I have all read this evening, I have to say that you have me hooked. Great job! hehe. I loved the instant attraction and the making out with the new roommate bit, hehe. Well so far the story line is fun and entertaining and seems to be quite original. Keep up the great work and I hope to read more soon! Ah, yes, reviews are great. I like to say that I don't care if I get reviews or not but they are awefully inspiring so I feel obligated to review when I read something that I enjoy --Aitu
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Reviewed By: Kestrel Moonhaven On: September 06, 2004 05:47 CDT
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Good storyline you have going. Keep up the good work.
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