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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2005 04:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was a great fic. It was very light-hearted with comedy and romance. And excatly what I was in the mood for tonight. Thank you. ;-) -TrinityK
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Title: breath takeing
Reviewed By: Arina On: June 30, 2005 00:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awsome story.It has funny and romantic parts in here! I cried and was so happy. It took me at least 12 hours to read this wonderful story! Thank you for writeing this!ta ta ~Arina ;)
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Reviewed By: Sunshyne surfa On: November 29, 2004 21:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was a really great story. I loved your sense of description. you ended the story extremely well. I'm so proud of you as an author! I mean , i don't know you, but if you write this damn good, you MUST be cool! You must write more!
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Reviewed By: Zelix (not logged on) On: October 29, 2004 16:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bravo *claps his hands* I loved it, EXCELLENT workd!!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 14:29 CDT
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excellent ending to a wondeful story. though i am sad to see it end, you did it well. :-) i hope you choose to write more on down the road and good luck with it all.
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Reviewed By: Aitu--not signed in On: October 28, 2004 23:36 CDT
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Wow! Holy hottness batman! hehehe. Poor Shippou, every ones's getting some but him, hehehe. You did a great job with this chapter Joy! I enjoyed it lots and lots. I don't want it to be over. =( Make a sequel! *begs* hahahha. Nah--- do what ever you want. I'll keep reading if ya write anything new =P Bye-bye-for now! hehe ---Autumn
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 ( not logged in ) On: October 23, 2004 14:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooo this is soooo good
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: October 19, 2004 18:52 CDT
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awwwww-- That was cute. I'm glad they made up even thought I like Tai, hahaha. Great chapter. Only a few left?! =O I dont want it to be over, haha. It should be like 5,000 chapters long-- that would be great! Okay, so maybe 5,000 isn't that realistic but hey--- hehehe. Can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2004 14:58 CDT
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awsome addition to your story, excellent job. i love the way that you have defined the characters...and good addition with the new guy. hehe. what can InuYasha do now but intervein? lol. excellent.
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: October 15, 2004 14:19 CDT
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ouuuuuu! Loves it! heheheeh. That was just amazing. Perhaps my favorite chapter as of now! hehehe, oh look, I have a case of the giggles-- once I get them I cannot seem to get rid of them. I just wanna read the next chapter right now---hehehe-- Good ole' Tai-- He's good at pissing Inuyasha off in any situation. So any plans on what happens next? I can't wait to see what you have in store for us next! Keep up the amazing work and I hope to hear more from you very very very soon! hehehe.---Autumn
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: October 07, 2004 00:04 CDT
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ouuuuuu! That bitch! (Inuyasha) haha. I really want Kagome to get back at him! hmmm, you can borrow Tai, from my story, lol. It seems to be going now where at the moment so he doesn't have any plans, lol. Just a thought. Awesome. It made me very anit-Yasha, so if that was the goal-- great job!!!! if not-- GREAT JOB ANYWAYS! hehehehe. I
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 02:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great writting, i still have a wase to go with reading, i'm only half way through. only thing stopping me from finishing is the sheer time factor. great job and i can't wait to see where this goes. carry on :-)
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Reviewed By: spdswyf On: September 23, 2004 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a great chap!!! This story just rocks!! Can't wait to see the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: September 23, 2004 00:13 CDT
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YEY! it's a new chapter. Loved it! You really had me tricked there. I thought that it was Kagome and Inuyasha till someone said "Sango." And then I got really confused, LOL. Ah, great job-- that was awesome! I cannot wait for more! --Aitu
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Reviewed By: szmadad [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2004 16:59 CDT
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Y'know...your version of Kagome ROCKS...I mean, she cooks, she's stylish, she can dance, she's got a harem, she writes fanfics (apparently she's the author of The Little Ninja, eh?), and her friends adore her! Wow, I think I sound just like Inuyasha, don't I? And he...well...he's always amazing! This story is so fun to read...and I love how there's so much Inu-Kag stuff going on...because they are my fave couple... Can't wait til they get to have some lemony action themselves! :)
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