| "Under Anothers Watchful Eye" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: jade_pendant [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 20:13 CST
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keep it going gurl
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 22:24 CST
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this chapter had some absoutly beautiful words in it. the way you knitted the sentences together...marverlous. they flew together in such a beautiful way. awsome. brought a tear to my eye, honest. :-)
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 13:02 CDT
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good update, i was a little thrown by the chapter before this one, it was kind of random but definatly a great update. awww. :-) keep it going, good job.
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Reviewed By: Zonza [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 01:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I just found this fic and I gotta say I wish I had found it sooner, its such a wonderful heartwarming and at the same time heart wrenching story.... I just love it!!! I hope to be able to read more soon, and I can't wait to see how everything turns out... eagerly awaiting your next update ~Zonza
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 00:57 CDT
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I've been reading this story for a while and I really like it. Thanks for the update and I hope to read more soon!
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Reviewed By: ladygizarme On: October 24, 2004 03:21 CDT
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yay, an update! well.... back to waiting for the next one....
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 12:51 CDT
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you have a beautiful flow of your words in this chapter. very very good job. good that Kagome remembers...now to kill the voice in her mind. lol. excellent and update soon. :-)
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Reviewed By: Inu-Taiyoukai_6501 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 21:43 CDT
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I never shut up, do I? -_-;; *sigh* UPDATE SOON!....or else AHAHAHAHAHA
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Reviewed By: Inu-Taiyoukai_6501 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 21:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAH!...KAGOME LOST HER MEMORY.....ouch my head is spinng in confusion of trying to remember which fic is fic @_@.....well....great fic....keep UPDATING...i hope Kagome gets her memory back otherwise...I WILL TEAR YOU LIMB FROM LIMB *eyes burning with fire and rage*....Kagome shouldnt forget Inuyasha ever!.....what has happened to you lately....have you lost your memory too?!?!....am i alone in this world?!?!?!?1......i am so damn confused!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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the story is comming along wonderfully. you have such a great grasp as to character definition and character motivation. great plot interventions and great job overall. i can't wait to see what happens.
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Reviewed By: Jet_black offline On: September 28, 2004 15:20 CDT
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great chapter!!!!!! O.O but you can't just stop there!!!! you're soooo mean ; . ; Update SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 00:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another Great chapter. Poor Kagome to have to go through that. Whats going to happen next to Kagome? Please continue ^__^
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Reviewed By: Inu-Taiyoukai_6501 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 21:36 CDT
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oooo Sango and Miroku sittin in a tree K-I-S-S-I-N-G, LoL i love your fic. UPDATE SOON.
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Reviewed By: Kellie On: September 22, 2004 20:02 CDT
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Wonderful chapter. This story is going great, but I have a feeling that thats going to change. I wonder whats going to happen next. Please continue ^__^
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Reviewed By: anime fan On: September 20, 2004 01:41 CDT
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good story, i want more chapters. i'll check again in a few days. keep up the good work.
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